UPGRADED LORD BOROS IN DRAGON BALL
Author: MegaDanijel
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John Smith dies and got reincarnated as upgraded boros in dragon ball.Read it how he conquers universes of dragon ball. if you don't like mc that is stronger than everyone don't read
COVER IS NOT MINE. I DON'T OWN DRAGON BALL SERIALS...they are own by their respective authors...
My first language is not English so expect some mistakes
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IT'S MY FIRST FANFIC
This is a pretty good story, as long as you ignore the minor spelling errors and some bad grammar. It is a very good fan fic for a new author.
I hope you do not take it the wrong way but you have an incredible fanfic, but you need to clarify more when something is thought or said, more separation between paragraphs and there are times when speech feels very unnatural
At first I caught what you write, I think a lot of things can be taken out of it and I like the sub-story itself I look forward to further chapters.[img=recommend]
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Writing Quality : 3/5 Stability of Updates : 5/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design : 4/5 World Background : 3/5 This story main idea is great and the story line and time are ok but the problems are the following: [ 1: the writting quality needs to be better. I feel like I'm listening to a Russian friend who did 5 months of Blyat English training. .. , 2: It's better to not go crazy on the system , gacha and so on are too much for a fanfic where the MC already is powerful, the problem is that Gacha needs good explanation and I don't feel like we know enough of it . 3: The romantic relation was so sudden and so fast it felt like nothing, I didn't feel happy nor angry, like reading a cup of water ... nothing . ] The story is good but I will stop in here my comrade.