The Last of the Thundersouls

The Last of the Thundersouls

Fantasy25 Chapters37.0K Views
Author: Wizedex
4.7
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The Last of the Thundersouls is about a young 16-year-old boy who lives on his own, Rambone Lewis. His father was killed in an accident a few years ago and his mother is never home from her near endless stream of business trips across the world. When he goes to visit a friend of his, he runs into an unlikely event that will throw the both of them into a whirlwind of a journey as they uncover government secrets and conspiracies.

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Wizedex
Wizedex

Shameless 5 star review from the author I know... Let me use this as a chance to give some progress updates and how I've felt on my work on this so far: It hasn't been a total nightmare surprisingly. I'm planning to give Luca and Rambone new looks soon in this current part/arc of the story and use it as a grounds for training and as a way to introduce my magic system which has gone through a lot of revisioning (a good amount since I started this series) and I think that you guys will really like it! My plan for the story is just about complete and currently its just about putting what's on my head and my manuscripts onto paper for you all to read! My gripe in this so far is that I'm not the biggest fan of my characters so far and my release schedule can feel inconsistent at times thanks to some lack of motivation or energy. The support I've gotten from all of you guys is a major motivator for me to keep going. I love you guys.

3 years ago
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Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619

Shall I say, Luca and Rambone are just amazing lol definitely one of my great read and I know as the story unfold with more chapters it'll only get better hence here I am supporting this book and the author with my 5 star review 🤗. If you're in doubt whether to read it if not then do it, read it and you won't be disappointed.

3 years ago
3
Alexanderctn
Alexanderctn

Story is very good and I just have very minor gripes. Not sure if it's grammatical errors or the author meant it that way. Still pretty good though. Keep up the good work!

3 years ago
2
Apoqliphoth
Apoqliphoth

Definitely one of my favourite recent reads. The story is just unfolding and we're getting through it with the lovely (and somewhat hilarious) interactions of Rambone and Luca. I have the feeling that it's only going to get better with time and more releases, so I'll for sure add it to my library. For anyone reading this review, give this book a try! You won't be disappointed.

3 years ago
2
MidnightEgg
MidnightEgg

Initial review, I like how it starts off with hints for what might come in addition to a core event that cements the character's motivation. From the author's inspirations mentioned within the auxiliary chapters, this will likely be a long-term project which will grow in quality as the author's skills develop over time. Whilst it's relatively clean and easy to read it got both some descriptive and grammatical shortcomings, nothing too severe or to the story's detriment, but for now, it's not enough for me to personally give the writing quality a top-notch score. Other than that I like how the story begins and whoever reads this review I would try to sway you to give this one a chance so you can share your own opinions.

3 years ago
2
The_Procrastinator
The_Procrastinator

Reveal Spoiler

3 years ago
2
fireguy2465
fireguy2465

This story has super high potential and I have definitely enjoyed my time reading this. The plot has very high potential and has shown flashes of it so far. The characters are loveable and great. The worldbuilding is stellar. Updates could come more consistently and the grammar still needs some work (I'm very heavy grammar after all). Also I hope the comedy gets better, as to me it really isn't the funniest type of humor.

3 years ago
2
HaoShu
HaoShu

There are fewer grammar errors and u can understand what the author wants to convey his story as. While reading the story, I enjoyed every part of it, though there were a few minor issues here and there, I know that the Author will get better in his way as the time passes.

3 years ago
2
The_Novel_Man
The_Novel_Man

The novel is new but the Storyline is fascinating to an extent that grabs readers attention. Beautiful pictures are drawn through these words. The MC and his friend has their own unique personality and mindset, I would highly recommend this novel. Good wishes to author and his great work.

3 years ago
1
Arif_207
Arif_207

The characters I like and the writing quality is good.I felt the mystery and action at the start then when they entered the new place I felt the adventure aspect of it.Overall really liked it and I was engaged.The new place didn't have a lot of chapters but I know when there are more chapters released I'll really enjoy it.

3 years ago
1
Ryo_Toujo
Ryo_Toujo

Three chapters in and its easy to tell that this book is one that paces itself quite well. Aside from a major shock in Chapter 2, and the semblance of one in Chapter 1, the story moves at a gentle pace- initially at least, It likely isn't everyone's cup of tea, but what room there is for shock value, is instead replaced by character interaction and dialogue - something I feel is equally important within a story. So in short, come for the overarching plot, but stay for the characters that develop thanks to the world within!

3 years ago
1
NobleQueenBee
NobleQueenBee

The two main characters bicker like old friends (which I love), and the adventure will get your blood pumping. It is an exciting read and has a ton of potential!

3 years ago
1
ImSadge
ImSadge

currently on chapter 3 and I must say author is pretty good. Tbh, I'm not good at rating people work but this one is good so I suggest you read it. I can see the author but his effort to this, you can see it when you read this novel. I won't say anymore, all the best for you author-san.

3 years ago
1
HowlingD4wn
HowlingD4wn

As far as I've read, I love the characters, the plot and most definitely the world building. My only gripe is here and there, you have either a phrasing problem or a grammatical error. It doesn't cut away from how I understand the story, but me being a bit of a grammar demon, I did take note of them. Overall good read[img=recommend]

3 years ago
1
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_Rue

A romance type of reader but this book is really great, love the writing and the characters, will definitely recommend this novel to my readers and friends that love these types of novels.in addition, keep this up, I love your work .[img=recommend]

3 years ago
1
Sukyna_Katamba
Sukyna_Katamba

I should be honest. It's a missing masterpiece, so well arranged. you're truly good at this. I'm even out of words but all I can say, you surely rock.

3 years ago
1