The concept of the novel is interesting. It needs improvement on writing quality though; grammar and pronouns. For the characters, their traits are also interesting and I hope to see more developments. Overall, I think I had fun reading these early chapters. 🤔
3 years ago
4
NathanPresotto
Hehe Autor falando~ Eu vou tentar digitar, merda eu uso celular e difícil [img=faceslap], se der certo esse romance eu vou ficar escrevendo.
3 years ago
4
Alucard_Black
Very good...[img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the novels great some grammar errors here and there not new concept but interesting to say the least very engaging and im hooked very nice 4.0 cause update and world background not that complete
3 years ago
3
Eternal_devil
🙂I like this story bUt bro repetiting linE frome otHer’s pOint of View 👍i am waiting for next cheaters
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3 years ago
3
LoboBrancoKing
Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito,
espero que continue assim
3 years ago
3
ZeBolaFodaBRs
História boa demais, e principalmente quando é feita por Br isso nos dá motivação para ler com gosto...Long Meili minha personagem preferida...Amei [img=update]
waiting for new chaps and the story was very good we will like you to continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️😊😊😊😊😊❤️😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😇😇😇😇
3 years ago
1
oximoron
I love the story but when will you update, author?
2 years ago
0
Shivam_Pandey_4996
I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.
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The concept of the novel is interesting. It needs improvement on writing quality though; grammar and pronouns. For the characters, their traits are also interesting and I hope to see more developments. Overall, I think I had fun reading these early chapters. 🤔
Hehe Autor falando~ Eu vou tentar digitar, merda eu uso celular e difícil [img=faceslap], se der certo esse romance eu vou ficar escrevendo.
Very good...[img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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the novels great some grammar errors here and there not new concept but interesting to say the least very engaging and im hooked very nice 4.0 cause update and world background not that complete
🙂I like this story bUt bro repetiting linE frome otHer’s pOint of View 👍i am waiting for next cheaters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito, espero que continue assim
História boa demais, e principalmente quando é feita por Br isso nos dá motivação para ler com gosto...Long Meili minha personagem preferida...Amei [img=update]
Goood...Creative...😍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
waiting for new chaps and the story was very good we will like you to continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️😊😊😊😊😊❤️😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😇😇😇😇
I love the story but when will you update, author?
I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.