it's a bit confusing i guess but the plot is good and we start to see some world building the character are good you should give the book a read if you are reading this
4 years ago
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Yuinetro
Hi, Author here, please review the chapter and give feedback , I NEED FEEDBACK, so i can improve my writing and get better in contest. you will get 11 chapters minimum within 11 days. let's hope for the best. please give powerstones aswell.
it's a bit confusing i guess but the plot is good and we start to see some world building the character are good you should give the book a read if you are reading this
Hi, Author here, please review the chapter and give feedback , I NEED FEEDBACK, so i can improve my writing and get better in contest. you will get 11 chapters minimum within 11 days. let's hope for the best. please give powerstones aswell.