Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

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Author: JohnKoenig
3.5
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This Game of Thrones Fanfiction will follow Apollyon, the main Villainess of the For Honor Universe, as she is reincarnated into House Lannister.



Following are three Points I would like to mention:



The time between the upload of new Chapters will be irregular.



No other For Honor Characters will find themselves in this new World.



Apollyon will gain some Abilities, making her even more dangerous, and one might say Overpowered.







https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/49473/apollyon-game-of-thrones-fanfiction



Audiobook: https://youtu.be/lqomLKshkkE



Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/bePatron?u=45375260

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AinzO0alGown
AinzO0alGown

God The POV is terrible 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😤😤😤😫😫😫😤😫👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

3 years ago
42
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

This is one of those Y/N fics that only special people like. The overall concept of the story wasn't all that bad, but the execution of it made my head spin. Especially with this first person like view that describes how YOU supposedly experience a scene and stuff rather than the character. Its too alien for me. It's like someone describing their toe nail fetish using your own pov. Because you don't experience the world in their way, and thus don't share it, it becomes an absolute xtremely trippy and dizzying reading experience that feels like you entered a roller coaster just as you got out of the car after a long trip with your motion sickness having acted up, and someone suddenly having pushed you in the front car of some messed up rollarcoaster ride with the excuse it will cure your motion sickness. .. Needless to say, I would not recommend a story from the Y/N pov

3 years ago
29
JohnKoenig
JohnKoenig

Hello there, John is my name, and as you know, I'm the author, and I'm writing this little review to clarify a few points. Firstly, the matter of capitalisation errors, you will continue to see them in future chapters, but they will later be rectified in a second more polished version of this story. Secondly, the matter of the story being written in second person, that won't change, but perhaps you can have more fun if you simply imagine it like your GM narrating a past D&D session to you. And thirdly, I ask that you honestly think about your ratings, people that give one star because they think the overall rating is too high aren't much better than people spamming five-star reviews. And with that, I wish all of you much fun with my story. :D

3 years ago
5
Charlie_Sowern
Charlie_Sowern

If this was in a normal POV, it would have been interesting ..................................................................... ..........

3 years ago
7
Meowerz
Meowerz

The POV is actually fine, yes it's weird if you're unfamiliar with it but you get used to it as you read on. For the capitalization, it's easy to ignore and well, would you rather have this than horrendous grammar. For the OPness of the main character, I'm fine with it. I actually quite like the sense of slice of life that this provides rather than the 'grind' for more abilities. Although I would like more interactions with the other characters such as her parents or her siblings.

3 years ago
4
Nxgen_Snail_Kota
Nxgen_Snail_Kota

I'm sure there is a decent story to be told here, and I'm willing to bet the author put a moderate amount of time and effort into writing and editing it but the 2nd person pov is a complete turn-off. This type of book would probably do a lot better on Wattpad where stories told in this fashion take up around 35% of the total stories on there.

3 years ago
4
Zetsway
Zetsway

I won't say much about the story, but, really, you made a Villain in GoT? There are like, 1 maybe 2 genuinely good people in the whole story and you felt like add another evil one?

2 years ago
3
ThePandaCritic
ThePandaCritic

lol, it's funny that people hate or review a low story because it's in the second POV stated in the description. I mean you read at your own risk but why hate when the author was honest up front, this int my cup of tea I don't do female Mc but ill leave a good review just because in the comment section I see you are very courteous to those people.

3 years ago
2
Fancy_Baggeute_101
Fancy_Baggeute_101

The poinT of view is such a pain like The stiry and the idea are really nice but pov is ruining it 😞😞😞😞😞😞

3 years ago
2
57843
57843

I dont mind the PoV, the story is good as well but take it witha grain of salt bcz this narrating style os not for everyone and I am a sucker for villain MC

2 years ago
1
_Shiromi_
_Shiromi_

Writing Quality [★★★oo] - Questionable... Story Development [★★★★o] - hmm..okay not bad I think. Character Design [★★★oo] - Don't know Updating Stability [★★★oo] - Don't know,just 'new' to this story... World Background [★★★oo] - ..... ---> Good novel..just only POV... It's a real issue here.I know why author using it and love how they explained this problem to others. But well can't change the opinion that POV ruined this. Nice try tho... just need 'fix'.Also I hope you can learn this from experiences.

2 years ago
1
Queen_Karina
Queen_Karina

Author will she always have that problem with her mind or will she be cured? I’m only 11 chaps in. Please spoil me because I don’t want to read about an mc that can be taken advantage of so easily.

2 years ago
1
SirSuicideSurvivor
SirSuicideSurvivor

SSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO GGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDD 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

2 years ago
1
Fito
Fito

giving it a try, i'm not familiar with apollyon and i don't like the second person reading either, the plot seems ok at first but the mc is too op, it would be better if she only had a basic ability and grew with time.

3 years ago
1
Cthulhu12
Cthulhu12

I like the story, I don’t know honestly. Keep up your wok. 🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽

3 years ago
1