Spaceships are beautiful

Sci-fi8 Chapters5.8K Views
Author: MasterBurns
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A story about the sudden end of normal life and how with mysterious help the universe is conquered.



The story starts in 2018 in our world and then no longer follows the past events.



This story is told from the first person perspective. Sometimes at least i found it very difficult to create many chapters in this style in a really meaningful way for this reason i will only use the first person perspective as a stylistic device for interesting passages or sometimes a chapter.



I (the main character) am Surgrim 22 years old and have led a normal life so far. I was rather bad in school and have an education as an IT specialist. Normally I sit at home at the computer and play whatever falls into my hands. But I let my grandma talk me into taking a real vacation on this fateful day.



This is the first time I write a story and let other people read it I look forward to any helpful comments. Furthermore, English is not my native language and it may happen that my choice of words is rather strange.

Again, please point this out to me so that I can learn and improve.



In conclusion, I am writing this story in addition to my full-time job and it will happen that there are sometimes a few weeks no new chapters, but I hope that this is rather the exception.

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British_neko
British_neko

overall pretty good for now wity 2 chaps and well everything is good if you want just some vibin in my non-harmful opinion have a KSP wallpaper whilst you're here

2 years ago
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kokishorttail
kokishorttail

Seems to be a vary interesting plot so far with two chapters, hope the author picks it back up. I would love to see how the story evolves. It’s a unique plot so far as I’ve seen.

2 years ago
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