To Be The Devil's Daughter: The Beginning
When Roxy is accidentally summoned by a group of Men in New York amidst a tragedy they couldn't avoid. She smirked as soon as she realized what realm she had come back to. Humanity had joined forces to defeat a common enemy: The Shifters. And to that, the system of Shifter Regime was established, back in the year after The Cold War.
"So what's your story, girl? Why should we take you as a scout?"
"Many people call me many names. Some call me the Daughter of Hell, and some call me The Cursed Offspring of Lucifer, the Fallen Angel. Most of the times, I go by the name...Roxy. Humans here call me Roxy Malford, but don't know how to respect me." She introduced herself but even this human had laughed at her.
"You're hired. Welcome to the Regime, Roxy Malford. Here we defeat evil...with evil. My secretary will direct you to your designation, starting from now." Oh, the smirk on her face.
They say, there's Good in every Bad thing and there is Bad in every Good thing.
Roxy is set to test her limits by the powers she possesses as the fate of the darkness depends on her.
It's a nice story. it isn't hard to warm up to the characters, and the author did a good job in making them feel alive. Although author needs more editing to make the reading experience feel smoother. P.S. Still waiting for more chapters.
This is an interesting story and I love it especially that it has to do with the 'fate of darkness' Thumbs up author, keep up the good work.
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Hmm... The story's flow is cool. I like it. However, not sure why no one mentioning about the sentence structure? Normally, a sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a period. But almost all sentences here start with small letters. Not sure why it's like that. Anyway, a simple auto-correct function will help in that... no big deal. Other than that, it's really nice concept as well since the author is doing his/her research well. keep it up!
I read your stories and really enjoyed it, If I may give my feedback, the topics you choose are very interesting, and I hope you continue creating such amazing stories, also i have some ideas for you
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