Becoming a Monster

Good story! You actually made de mc loss of humanity seem realistic, considering the circumstances and all the characters feel alive too. The only bad thing about the story so far is that there are not enough chapters.

I came here to check why no chapter was posted for awhile to see this situation. It is unfortunate that this novel is being harassed by trolls or the woke crowd. Example someone saying how mc is simp cause he kills males but not females ect yet the novel shows his mindset on what he is thinking for his actions not to mention he has killed plenty indirectly of both male and female. Also he doesn’t kill the males at times also and even saves them for benefits. Mc personality is about growing stronger and doing things that will benefit him though we still see his internal struggles and how he is growing. TLDR Most if not all low reviews are just trolls or what people consider the woke crowd attacking the novel as you will notice the same thing being repeated on the low reviews like simp or mtl (if this is mtl then I wish all mtl was like this) Hope the author gets this resolved and comes back as it is a good novel. Ps I am obviously a bot account that has been undercover for years just for this moment is probably what the negative reviewers(The ones that are like the ones I describes above) would say.

I'm starting to love this novel you can feel the sanity of the main character and what makes him human slowly drifting away it’s a great experience and I hope other people find this novel and support it.

Why are the good novels being dropped?😔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔😔. It was jus getting good too.

Writing is okay, there are some areas where grammar is lacking making it hard to understand. The setting is your generic apocalypse scenario, system and all. The story is wierd, and I cant decide if its fast or slow paced. Each chapter has action and conflict but is somehow takes ages to resolve. Eg chapters 10 thru 17 are spent on a single conflict and with the length of the chapters thats alot of words for what amounts to taming a spider and fighting one man. The mc is disappointing. At the very least I expect the author to keep their mcs personality and decisions consistent with their purported backstory but I guess thats too much to ask here. Tldr. He's a rich kid that spent his life living up to his parents expectations. He has no friends, he's bullied blah blah, u know the usual edgy template we see everywhere nowadays. Problem is as soon as the apocalypse starts, he goes full sociopath. I mean cmon at least show some disgust or emotion after you bash your roomates head in other than catharsis. His subsequent interactions with individuals and internal monolouge come off as hasty, compulsive, comedic, whimsical even. This is not how someone shunned by society acts in any scenario. Of course, when the plot calls for it, he will magically start exhibiting traits and thoughts owing to his absuive upbringing if only to skew the story in a particular direction.

this is sooooo good!!! it is the best apocalypse LN i have read (their is also orv so yah) but really great i recommend people to definitely read this Also Author when are you gonna update the chapters i have waited for so long for other chapters

I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways: Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it. Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.

Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one

Reveal Spoiler

This was quickly growing to be my next favorite book, sadly realized it's no longer being updated.

I love it ........................................................................................................................................................

one of the best ones ive read. i really enjoyed the opening arc. i wish the author would continue with this story. ill keep checking back periodically and looking forward to more.

this is a top tier apocalypse novel. everything is just perfect but why the f. . author isn't updating new chapters? did he drop it or not, it's already been over 5 months and there's no news 😞😞

I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint