Fate Deified

It's time to hunt those legendary heroine booties! Let's get this party started boys and girls, but mostly boys I'm guessing if you were drawn here by that cover art. Mmmm, BB-Sakura be stacked yo!

I'm only writing this review to warn some people it is written in 2nd person point of view. I like the writing of the author I just find the fanfictions he writes in 2nd person weird? other than that it's good.

The only thing that can be considered bad about this story is the fact that it is in 2nd person. Your stories are awesome but I feel not only bored but also irritated when I see so much 'you' in a paragraph. It would have been far better if it was in first or third person view. ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww

The story is good but my only issue here is the 2nd POV. Idk if I'm the only one who feels irritated and weird seeing the 'you' so many times. It's like I'm reading a story from Wattpad(many novels use 2nd POV).

nominate a Rock you deem the most beautiful one ......................................................................................................

GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but...MORE LEMON, PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!! ...................................................................................

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Pretty good fanfic, first time reading 2 person pov. and not minding it ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

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