My novel is full of mistakes so pls don't expect to much I am still trying to learn more.
spelling and grammar even the words that I will use is still imature so have patient I am improving my skills.
Chapters are way too short even when there’s a warning for it. Feels way too rushed since chapters are so short, every six to seven chapter combined I’d say is equal too around 1500-1800 words.
you get better everytime, try your best, don't give up the novel it's quite good for my opinion, some gramitical errors but still I Like the story
3 years ago
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Lexter_Pedz_5606
your novel is not perfect, but I did not say I don't like it, harem, the battle not bad.
your grammar is same as me, the wrong spelling same.
Out of all not perfect, but I'll keep it.
3 years ago
6
Lone_Wolf_7048
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I love the passion put into this story. I also love the profanity. These characters and the dialogue is hilarious. Of course some grammatical errors but those can always be fixed. Keep it up
My novel is full of mistakes so pls don't expect to much I am still trying to learn more. spelling and grammar even the words that I will use is still imature so have patient I am improving my skills.
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Chapters are way too short even when there’s a warning for it. Feels way too rushed since chapters are so short, every six to seven chapter combined I’d say is equal too around 1500-1800 words.
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you get better everytime, try your best, don't give up the novel it's quite good for my opinion, some gramitical errors but still I Like the story
your novel is not perfect, but I did not say I don't like it, harem, the battle not bad. your grammar is same as me, the wrong spelling same. Out of all not perfect, but I'll keep it.
the updating is very fast and it's not bad for my cup of tea.[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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I love the passion put into this story. I also love the profanity. These characters and the dialogue is hilarious. Of course some grammatical errors but those can always be fixed. Keep it up
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