Hey, there's some that i want to point out first thats not gojo i will be convince if someone reincarnated in Gojo's body with his power, and if that's gojo the first thing that will he say when saving someone is "Yo, you alive" he will not confort him Gojo is prideful that's why he like to say he's the Strongest(though this is a fanfic still your description is Gojo is reborn). Second there's barely character interaction one moment he is a baby after time skip he's already walking then next chapter he's already flying , that's fine but atleast give us a back story how his life went on or how the he train his power we know gojo is a genius so atleast give a description of his skill and how much time he takes to master that or how he can fly and you know gojo need cursed energy to use his power, and the plot is force you can make kathlyn and gojo meet because there a meeting between their parents, c'mon their parents is both a ruler of a kingdom not always cliche like damsel in distress. Im only giving my opinion and not in the place to criticise you because im not a writer or anything im only a reader and you make an effort to write a story even if its a hobby thats amazing but there's a lot of plot hole so KEEP IT UP and thank you for the story👌👍💯😊.
3 years ago
3
Anna_Bananaz
It is good, keep it up please and do not drop it please. This fanfic is dinferent. The other gojo x TBATE dont reincarnate him as a prince. This is quite unique interesting
3 years ago
3
greedy_reader17
keep up the updates and finish it pls.
3 years ago
2
Neel07
This looks really good and has potential ngl. I hope the release schedule is more consistent tho
Hey, there's some that i want to point out first thats not gojo i will be convince if someone reincarnated in Gojo's body with his power, and if that's gojo the first thing that will he say when saving someone is "Yo, you alive" he will not confort him Gojo is prideful that's why he like to say he's the Strongest(though this is a fanfic still your description is Gojo is reborn). Second there's barely character interaction one moment he is a baby after time skip he's already walking then next chapter he's already flying , that's fine but atleast give us a back story how his life went on or how the he train his power we know gojo is a genius so atleast give a description of his skill and how much time he takes to master that or how he can fly and you know gojo need cursed energy to use his power, and the plot is force you can make kathlyn and gojo meet because there a meeting between their parents, c'mon their parents is both a ruler of a kingdom not always cliche like damsel in distress. Im only giving my opinion and not in the place to criticise you because im not a writer or anything im only a reader and you make an effort to write a story even if its a hobby thats amazing but there's a lot of plot hole so KEEP IT UP and thank you for the story👌👍💯😊.
It is good, keep it up please and do not drop it please. This fanfic is dinferent. The other gojo x TBATE dont reincarnate him as a prince. This is quite unique interesting
keep up the updates and finish it pls.
This looks really good and has potential ngl. I hope the release schedule is more consistent tho
I like the story so far, keep up the good work.
nice