A Multiversal Adventure(Fanfic)
Follow or don’t, this is a project I am starting on my free time.
[ALL EVENTS OR CHARACTERS BELONG TO THEIR RESPECTIVE OWNERS. THIS IS MERLEY A FANFICTION OF MY FAVORITE ANIME, TV SHOWS AND MOVIES. ANYTHING RELATING TO ANYTHING IS PURELY FICTITIOUS]
[IMAGE IS FROM GOOGLE]
NOTE: (I have been made aware that my version of Kelly is not canon so… let’s just go with her being a parallel version of Kelly from a parallel [Halo-verse].
Apologies for the halo fans as I like halo too so I will say again that this was just a project I suddenly just started on my phone and uploaded it after a bit of writing.
Bare with the story and or lack-there-of one as I am planning on building and pulling more stuff from all over the place that may not make any or much sense…
I.e.; *BS-no-jutsu*)
Thanks, have a nice day.
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Very interesting read and fun! No issues with grammar and writing quality but the issue lies in story plot/development. The idea was well planned in the start but as the story progressed worlds went by as quick as half a chapter with no advancement to plot, and after that I don’t think there was much plot as it was just extremely random. One thing happening and then suddenly mc is fighting Godzilla. I am certain if this has a stricter plot with longer world visits it can improve.
MC's basicaly a slave and each chapter is a different world with no actual story. The MC comes to new world, timeskip, talks a little bit on what she did, leaves to next world.
Good quality writing but each chapter is a different world with there being zero development like in chapter 3 she is really strong because of using the system to get stronger but we get ‘nun’ (can’t remember the correct way of spelling it) of the system except in the beginning of the story and on a personal note I don’t like any of the anime worlds she goes to and em really annoyed because I thought this wold be a multiverse story where the character would spend more time in the haloverse not just kill one elite and some fan service about the flood winning
It's kinda unfair how even Female Lead FanFics have no #Action Tags despite not every novel having romance or something. WN sure is biased not to mention the fact that their Inkstone Website seems to be malfunctioning in the cover part.
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