Reincarnated as an Archangel in the Omniverse

I thought it was good because of the touching prologue at the start, but then the MC gets killed by his sister cliched style followed by him meeting Superman God. So I read the rest and recognized a pattern. You can check the author's works, he has good updating stability but his stories lack substance, full of plot holes, changing personality of the MC, cliche scenarios, etc. I thought he would improve from his previous works but it's all the same. It's a good wishfullfilment but that's it overall. The MC basically bros with Superman God but is actually working for him, anyways it's a wishfullfilment in a predictable storyline that the author slightly altered by adding extra tidbits like turning the OG main character a girl. (Bell from Danmachi to Bella) It follows an overpowered MC that can hunt at 3 years old, talk perfectly and none of the world's inhabitants are the wiser to point it out. Not my cup of tea, but good for wasting time if you turn off your brains.

Archangel Mael was tragic Character in SDS, was Original owner of Sunshine. Let see MC can do justice to his name. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

the incongruity of his age to his actions and specially the reactions of the people around him is what held this fic back for me. people might think it's a minor thing but when it doesn't affect perceptions of the characters when it's supposed to be, then there's something wrong with it. I read your previous fics and relatively enjoyed it, but somehow because of that detail it affects everything in the story...

This is a basic power fantasy / wish fulfillment story. I probably would have enjoyed this story if the main character wasn't a three year old who acted like an adult. It would have been better if the MC was inserted when Grandpa left and the body he was put in acted how the MC would have acted if he was reincarnated without memories but with his personality so nobody would notice any changes. Honestly one of my biggest hang ups for stories are the childhood arcs, most fanfic writers don't make them well. People seem to forget children are children not mini-adults. Also a head injury on a three year old that changes their personality should be a bigger deal then " oh you became more mature because of that fall ". In a world like Danmachi a swift personality change should be a huge cause for concern.

It's just one those cliche harem gathering novels, guy travels to different worlds, gathers whatever females he likes. It's like a traveling circus of different breeds of animals, It decently written, not too many errors at all. but it has no substance, nothing new to appeal to, every girl falls for the mc, even a few after a moment of meeting each other are already flirting for no reason. It is after all a wish fulfilment story, of course it will be nonsensical at times, but the way it is done is not really satisfying to read. He never mentions to his zoo of women, that he has others in different worlds, the constant lying, showing off whenever possible has its turn offs. It becomes harder to read the more you read.

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It's meh. But alot of cliché, The Mc doesn't use his head in a fight, I know he is op but killing a weak enemy with a city destroying attack is d*mb. And let's not forget he is acting like a grown man at 3 years old but the people around him don't find it weird (He literally went out hunting animals at 3 years and no one questioned it). I don't think the author was thinking when he wrote this.

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So far it's going to be another banger but it has a few problems with timeline in the first world(could say because it's a au that's why) and the second problem is Mc's age doesn't makes sense if he is around the same age as lily in pre time skip he should between 7 to 10.

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It reminded me of that fanfic where even at chapter 350 the main character was still a child of 6 years old, like at the beginning. Absolutely rubbish idea to write from the point of view of a child with adult thinking. I wonder what drives the minds of such authors? Why make the main character a child, with adult thinking, this is not Family Guy dude.

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I can't say I liked it, but at least it entertained me. It's a generic Wish Fulfillment with a lot of characters from different multiverses, those who like stories like that might like it. Personally, I hate the Gender Bender and I didn't really like the development of the story. But objectively speaking, it could be said that it is good.

The idea is good but the writing quality and development of the story is bad. H