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What an amazing read! The author did a great job with this and I can tell he really loves and cares for the story, I can feel the emotions leaking from the words, I can tell the characters are people and not just characters. Lovely.

The emotions are on high with this one! The begining of it pulls you in from the first page. The author does a really good job of setting the mood and the feel. You can tell that the mc feels like his whole life is really a tragedy and you really get that vibe with every chapter that makes it make sense. While slow at first, it does start to pick up in the later chapters. I will say there are a few grammatical errors here and there and sometimes the settings are really described, but besides that this story is pretty interesting so far. It seems different than other stories dealing with topics like this so I commened the author. Readers check this story out!

The word choice of the author is perfect! No one can deny that the beginning of the story is so interesting that it leaves readers going in-depth reading the tale. The author has a higher chance of taking off his book, provided he writes more engaging chapters.

A friend recommended this. Emotion is really strong here, like a novelised anime. Exactly my thing. It's tragic what happened in the later chapters but i guess it's meant for the greater good of the plot. Hoping for more

Hmmm... written in first POV. Interesting plot. There's a lot of emotions poured down in the available chapters. Keep it up, author!

Good wordbuilding, the characters are well immersed in the storyline, I like your interesting opening, good work author, waiting for more chapters, I recommend the novel.

The beginning already won me as a loyal reader. As someone who enjoys dark themes, I enjoyed the ride. The MC isn't OP, has proper development and the grammar is perfect! I look forward to where the story goes from here. Great work dear author!

Though it's just a few chapters updated so far, it nonetheless was an amazing intriguing story, honestly didn't find any fault in it, proper Grammer and punctuations, would urge readers to definitely give it a try, trust me it's worth the read, just wish the author would update more frequently 😄

the plot was amazing really the writing quality was definitely great I can visualize what I read and the updating stability... 2 chap a week was... 4 star

amazing writing skills from the Author. The book itself has a way to drae the reader in. I was impressed by the Mc's development and adaptation is very well written makinf it easier to understand the plot setting. A good read 👏🏼

An interesting concept and certainly original idea by the author, I recommend giving it the book a try, especially if readers enjoy very dark themes!

A fantasy novel worth reading. The premise, characters, plot, and Worldbuilding are good. The author still got a lot of potential to improve. I recommend this novel to all fantasy readers out there.

The title in itself somewhat mysterious and intriguing. The synopsis showed a quick character of MC and then the chapters depicted about his mysterious behavior. The chapters ended at cliffhanger especially the 4th one, where he recalled what he did in past. Bring more chapters, author😊. Don't hesitate to read this story and support the author😍