All I can say is :[ Very good chapter's Please give us more author-san and don't drop it ]
I hope this is not a harem Please
P.S: Sorry for the bad English 😅
3 years ago
112
I_cant_choose_name
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3 years ago
37
Demonzor
This story is a normal below average
Webnovel fanfic. The mc is kinda garbage has nothing that makes you wanna read about him. The other characters aren’t good either.the other thing that makes bad other then the mc and side characters is how terrible the author is at explaining how he is doing stuff like how he can use the powers of the characters from league
3 years ago
33
HangerBaby
The fic could be good but the author has this weird fascination with female looking males as I guess he doesn't understand the perfect male has a deep voice, a square jaw, and a more square face with rigid sword like eyebrows. It's to the point where most characters refer to the MC as a girl🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎.
3 years ago
26
Zekril
At the start its good but at the latest chapter its going to have to much drama..................................................................................................................
3 years ago
17
MrStealYourOnahole
this story reeks of baby's first crack fic if you aren't into that sort of thing this isn't for you.
2 years ago
8
Rimuru_Tempest_0449
This novel is awesome!!! In fact it's one of the best danmachi fanfics I've ever read! Thank you for this wonderful novel athor-san! Good job👍👍
3 years ago
5
Potato_Senpia
Yeah no no no non non no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non o no n on on ono no no no no no just no no no more no's
3 years ago
4
Tevin_Persinger
My main issue is the writing style. The timeline is all over the place. One chapter starts at mid day the halfway through thw chapter it switches to what happened earlier that day. Then the progress to the next day then the go back the the previous day afternoon. It's fine for a story to do this from time to time but when the whole story is written like this it gets annoying. I'm reading a novel for entertainment not to solve a puzzle of the timeline.
3 years ago
3
Frog_God_Mentor
Fried Frog's Legs recipe:
Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat.
Ingredients:
24 frog legs, skin removed
1 cup all-purpose flour
½ cup cornmeal
1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed
1 tablespoon ground black pepper
2 teaspoons salt
1 teaspoon minced onion
2 eggs
½ cup milk
2 cups vegetable oil for frying
1 cup peanut oil for frying
Cooking Instructions:
Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl.
Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep.
Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs.
Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs.
Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
2 years ago
2
no_life
pretty good could work on grammar some but that is all I can think to complain about other words to increase the count thingy this is takin
Непогана історія з достойним розвитком но плохо реалізована могли зробити краще но під кінець автор втомився и не знав куда розвивати дану історію а так твердая 4
All I can say is :[ Very good chapter's Please give us more author-san and don't drop it ] I hope this is not a harem Please P.S: Sorry for the bad English 😅
Reveal Spoiler
This story is a normal below average Webnovel fanfic. The mc is kinda garbage has nothing that makes you wanna read about him. The other characters aren’t good either.the other thing that makes bad other then the mc and side characters is how terrible the author is at explaining how he is doing stuff like how he can use the powers of the characters from league
The fic could be good but the author has this weird fascination with female looking males as I guess he doesn't understand the perfect male has a deep voice, a square jaw, and a more square face with rigid sword like eyebrows. It's to the point where most characters refer to the MC as a girl🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎.
At the start its good but at the latest chapter its going to have to much drama..................................................................................................................
this story reeks of baby's first crack fic if you aren't into that sort of thing this isn't for you.
This novel is awesome!!! In fact it's one of the best danmachi fanfics I've ever read! Thank you for this wonderful novel athor-san! Good job👍👍
Yeah no no no non non no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non o no n on on ono no no no no no just no no no more no's
My main issue is the writing style. The timeline is all over the place. One chapter starts at mid day the halfway through thw chapter it switches to what happened earlier that day. Then the progress to the next day then the go back the the previous day afternoon. It's fine for a story to do this from time to time but when the whole story is written like this it gets annoying. I'm reading a novel for entertainment not to solve a puzzle of the timeline.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
pretty good could work on grammar some but that is all I can think to complain about other words to increase the count thingy this is takin
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Непогана історія з достойним розвитком но плохо реалізована могли зробити краще но під кінець автор втомився и не знав куда розвивати дану історію а так твердая 4