I know that the name of the novel may be a little cliché, but I just decided to do it, anyway the synopsis:
This is a Genshin Impact fanfic and the story is about how he is Chong Yuns older brother and looks after him, this will have some Slice of Life elements, but don't worry there will be action. (there will also be some stuff about the MC I will not say, so you will have to read a little to know)
edit: I figured out that my first like 3 or 4 chapters are literal hot garbage because I didn't know what I wanted at the time, so please keep on reading, also I will rewrite them at some point.
so I'm giving my self a 3.6 because well I think it's about that much seeing how it is both not the best but also not the worst, if you read the novel please review it and tell me where you saw faults.
Well the premise for this novel is really interesting, seems like it’s been dropped tho so this review probably doesn’t matter. The problem is just the low amount of explanation given and the poor character descriptions and actions. Story barely started so can’t say much more than that