The author is here. Read and support the book please. Then I'll be able to write more chapters. Thanks in advance girbyour support and encouragement. God bless.
2 years ago
8
DaoOfEternity
its good.
no need to explain further, read it.
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2 years ago
5
Saint_of_Harem
Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
2 years ago
3
DaoistoFXgig
Not my personal type of book but it was an overall great story that deserves a bigger comunity
a year ago
0
Losta_Soulsy
Reveal Spoiler
2 years ago
0
soso1111
Another great book. ... Loving it already after.. .. . Want more chapter. .. .
2 years ago
0
Queenfarment
A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
2 years ago
0
bumabamba
This book as had me hooked since I started reading it. The perfect blend of character development action and backstory. An amazing read from start to finish. In my opinion it should be officially published and promptly turned in to a movie in the future.
2 years ago
0
Grim_reaper_lord
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
2 years ago
0
Sacred_Saint
The Good: A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part. Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows!
The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense.
The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)
2 years ago
0
Aceofhearts
I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!
2 years ago
0
Tempestous_goddess
I'm not joking, this book is dope. What interests me the most here is the maim character. How can someone be so fleshed out in just the 29 chapters, it baffles me. The world building is interesting, but I hope it adds a little more uniqueness within the chinese xianxia genre. All in all, a book well worth reading!
2 years ago
0
Sword_goddess
love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much.
2 years ago
0
Ki_
it's interesting. the novel is a kind of eastern fantasy and western elements but really entertaining. I can recommend it for new readers looking for a new book to read.
The author is here. Read and support the book please. Then I'll be able to write more chapters. Thanks in advance girbyour support and encouragement. God bless.
its good. no need to explain further, read it. ..........................................................................................
Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
Not my personal type of book but it was an overall great story that deserves a bigger comunity
Reveal Spoiler
Another great book. ... Loving it already after.. .. . Want more chapter. .. .
A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
This book as had me hooked since I started reading it. The perfect blend of character development action and backstory. An amazing read from start to finish. In my opinion it should be officially published and promptly turned in to a movie in the future.
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
The Good: A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part. Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows! The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense. The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)
I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!
I'm not joking, this book is dope. What interests me the most here is the maim character. How can someone be so fleshed out in just the 29 chapters, it baffles me. The world building is interesting, but I hope it adds a little more uniqueness within the chinese xianxia genre. All in all, a book well worth reading!
love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much.
it's interesting. the novel is a kind of eastern fantasy and western elements but really entertaining. I can recommend it for new readers looking for a new book to read.