The youngest son of the Ingraves family, Rob, lives a hardworking but carefree life on the outskirts of the forest with his family. One day, he and his loyal pet, Fenrir, are entangled with a misfortune event that makes them cast away into a new realm of magic. This new world may look like a sunny magical fantasy, but it is a dark world where summoning magic is a closely guarded knowledge.
Rob finds himself in a position where he must fool everyone that he is a skilled Summoner while trying to find a way back home. Such an intricate web of lies may help them find the power to succeed, but one misstep could mean their demise. Follow this unrelenting pair as they face all odds with only wit and an unfathomable amount of coincidences and luck, as they struggle to return home.
Please be advised that this novel might contain vulgar language and specified acts of violence, torture, racism, rape, etc.
So far, so good. The writing quality is great and easy to understand, not only that but the story development is going at a steady pace and doesn't seem rushed. I look forward to seeing how the story and writing style develops as the story progresses. 9/10 would recommend.[img=coins]
The storyline is excellent, it gives great attention to the importance of each character and shows how well connected they are to the world, if that makes sense. The character designs are incredible and if I could give more than five stars for character design I absolutely would!
The novel is a terrific execution of a classic theme. The attention to detail and amount of thought put into each chapter really expresses the author's care for this book and allows you to definitely get immersed in it! The characters are fantastically portrayed and so far each seems to have an independent personality. Even the personality of the MC's pet is terrific! The perspective shifts are smooth and not jarring, which allows certain conflict areas in the theme to be addressed as well as the introduction of new characters in a totally natural way that doesn't break immersion. Pacing seems to be on point so far.
Nice novel ......................................................................................................................... .
I'm suing webnovel since such an impeccable novel only has 14 collections as of now. The world-building is one of the most elaborate yet refined work, even the mona lisa can't compare to this masterpiece. Characters, style of writing, writing quality and most importantly, plot outline are so fabulously constructed, it gave me insights on how to write a proper novel. Good job!
a great writing structure with a understandable reading factor credibility the book is well-written in accordance with a nice theme🎇🎇🎆🎇
Nice novel , the story is going in very good direction and i wasnt able to feel any error with words or sentences so reading was smooth sail. The bonding btw dog and mc gives a unique setting of its own and there’s so much background with potential settings that can force readers to expect a lot from author in future and everything will depend on execution with future chapters , still waiting for more chs to see how plot unfolds before giving 5 stars
1. The writing quality is pretty good, with the occasional typo and some weird tense changes that break up the flow of the story. 2. Can't say much about the stability of updates, it's okay so far, like 1 every two days? 3. Story development is probably the best part of the novel so far, it's not too fast and not too slow, just perfect. 4. Character design is good, but pretty generic. The conditions that the character grew up in are pretty cliche. Also, although it's just a pet peeve of mine, but I really think that "Fenrir" is overused in stories on this platform. 5. World background is non-existent right now, so I gave it a four. Will wait until the world is explained a little better. Overall, a good read, waiting to see how the story grows.
Interesting story so far. I am curious to see what happens next which is a good thing. The MC character is an ordinary Joe with a big dog😏, I am cool with that. All in all, good job author
I can't see anything that needs major improvement. I will suggest giving your work another pass. This was a breath of fresh air. I could understand the plot and the flow was nicely place
This is an interesting read. The main character isn't a bad guy, but at times he does some questionable things, which makes it all the more interesting. I also enjoy how he isn't some powerful dude or anything, just a guy trying to survive.
the story is very interesting, is like you're in the story. I can't wait to see the amazing things he would do and I hope he and his father will reconcile. keep up the good work Author, am rooting for you.
Great! Keep going!