Chat Group For The Dead : Start From One Piece

Garbage. He makes legends seem like brainless morons. The the author tries to make the mc “smart” The way the character get stronger is utter garbage. He’ll say he ain’t experienced enough to be “this strong” because of experience when the author said he gains their experience

Editor Here : For me its a good read, MC will get OP quickly and change the One piece story, Chat Group member later on will came from different anime, and even marvel character came. As i read and edit, the only thing i hate is author hate for momonosuke, other than that its been a joy to edit this fanfic

could possibly be good but he's a marine and I refuse to read a marine mc not sure if he leaves in later chapters

It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I think it was so easy for MC/Lucas to get stronger.. Maybe make him still training ability he get.. Maybe you can add the dead from other anime.. There's many strong people who already dead from other animes.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍👍😍😍

Мне очень нравится эта история! Хоть герой и чрезвычайно сильный, но нельзя не отметить, что он и довольно умный. Приятно видеть, как герой включает логику и макает великих пиратов в их ошибки)

i could feel myself losing braincells at the logic that mc was spewing.

Utterly trash fanfic but at least it's good enough to understand what characters are saying. Mc is basically braindead but is still smarter than everyone and somehow everyone agrees with him. I mean sure he might not be wrong entirely but he is a human after all he should be proven wrong in short the plot is forced. Also I can't believe the absurdity of the plot I'm almost at the end of the current chapters I hope it gets better 💀

អ្នកកំពុងធ្វើនំដោយអត់ប្រើម្សៅ។ តួអង្គដែលខ្លាំងៗនៅក្នុងរឿងដើមនីមួយៗដូចជាត្រូវបានគ្រប់គ្រងខួរក្បាល។ របៀបដែលmcទទួលបានកម្លាំងពិតជាគួរឱ្យស្អប់។ ខ្លាំងដោយមិនចាំបាច់ខំប្រឹង? យ៉ាងហោចណាស់អ្នកនិពន្ធគួរតែបង្ហាញថាmcដែលអ្នកបានបង្កើតមានសមតិភាពក្នុងនាមជាតួឯកមិនជាសត្វឈ្លើង

is it necessary for mc to tell everyone that he can speak with the dead and they can lend/give their power to him? ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

The story is good, however, the first part of the book had no action at all - just people talking. GoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGood

good

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Good👍 Story👍 xhohohxgoxohxhoxhxohoxohx

Good story so far Need more chapter ghhh