Average Mage wants to reach the Apex
All Zed ever wanted to achieve in his life was to become one of the greatest mages of all time.
However, reality was cruel as not everyone was equal.
No amount of hard work could defeat talent. Similarly, no amount of hard work could change your status in life.
Whether you were born a peasant or a noble, that is the destiny you must live on.
Zed learned this the hard way but even until his last moments, he refused to give up.
After his passing, he woke up to an entirely different world with different values and culture.
Would he be able to reach greatness this time?
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Volume 1 is more focused in developing the bonds between the characters while volume 2 is where the story will truly begin.
Oh and if you can't deal with an old man trapped in the body of a child (MC) and is raising other children but the children in turn, develops romantic feelings for the MC. Then this isn't for you.
But don't get this mistaken, there isn't any pedophiliac content. The MC only considers them family.... for now...? Maybe, I don't know.
Stay and find out? Up to you.
Illustrations: https://discord.gg/js3NPKdqeG
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TL:DR, Just another chinese cultivation trash that may or may not be worth your time.
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Good novel just the sister and brother relationship is weird and how the author hints at the romance between them is disgusting anyway everything is good but shame the author has these ideas also if the novel Mc was the girl from the cover that would be fun but hey that's just me
The blurb is intriguing and it makes me want to read it again and again ... yeah.. The story's pace is alright not too slow and i love that thing . The flow of grammar is great not much error i spotted passed . Characters , i definitely liked them.. Will recommend readers out here to give this amazing book a chance to invade your world of magic . [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I've read 21 chapters so far. The novel has a great start. The first chapter perfectly sums up Zed's first life. His new life starts with a great scene that made me care for the two main characters. The following chapters are slow-paced, but I enjoyed reading them, too. They have more information about the world, Zed, and his sister. The world-building so far is done very well. I loved the action that started in chapter 9. It's a great story, full of magic and mystery.
It's not easy finding a good novel these days. It has good grammar and the flow of the story is also good, like hella good. Everything is reasonable that you can't really complain and make you want to read more. The issue of whether its harem or not... this is just my opinion, since I'm already quite attached to the well-made characters, I'm kinda hoping that it is a harem, I don't want this to be like a japanese anime where the freaking MC don't choose a girl. ANYWAY, 28 out of 10. lol P.S. Thanks for your hard work, and please work harder for more chapter (no pressure).
I love the beginning of this novel; how the writer immediately pulls us into the story's world. The narration and descriptions are great and the character development is simply amazing.
love the novel and characters. Female characters are a bit obsessed over him but it's good that they are not totally yandere.
great idea ruined by the simple fact the mc keeps trying to be s mage and not a cultivator poorly executed ides...I love the whole mage being reborn into a cultivation world and being a cultivator but being a mage in a cultivation world is just plain dumb and stupid
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the story is nice to read with interesting developments but well here comes the problem...after so much time all the heroines have become much stronger a ..and that's good ..but why the f**k is the mc still weak...he had so much time but barely improved..the author has purposely weaken the mc so as to display the awesomeness of the heroine but the mc is a massive turn off to read ....not to mention his simp like character ....the plot is good ..the interactions are good but the mc...is a disappointing trash..
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Alright, here’s my comprehensive review! Writing Quality- a solid 7/10, really good, although there are quite a few grammatical errors + small things like ‘phoenix’ instead of phoenix, but those could be resolved pretty easily, and the author actually does it when you let him know in chap comments. Updating Stability- The first chap was 6 days ago, the novel has 20 chapters. I give 5 stars for updating daily, so extra points too. Story Development- Surprisingly good. Cliche done right. The only thing im worried about is Arrogant young masters, 6/10 Chara Design- 9, the siblings’ interactions are fun to watch, and the princess actually is interesting. World BG- There has been close to nothing on it yet, the default I give when that’s happened is a 4/5
First of, great work author, interesting storyline, and well-written chapters( spotted no grammar error) even though I just started reading, I'm already hooked, I really like how the first chapter was written, the author has done such a great job at designing the characters too. So keep up the good work author. I'm sending you my best wishes.🤗🤗