Yami in One Piece.

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Right now the book has two covers. The grammar is very good and i haven’t noticed any mistakes. The writing style is also above average (not talking about webnovel average since that’s just trash). Since onpy two chapters have been updated much cant be said about updating stability, the story seems interesting with Yami from Black Clover going to One Piece. It has a lot of potential to be a good story. Right now only Yami has actually been portrayed (some other bull members too but eh) and it was done very well, doesn’t stray from the canon version, this might change later on since Yami will develop in a different way but thats for later. can’t say much since he just came out of the womb so the world hasn’t been explored yet. All in all it’s a good, promising looking story.

I really like the story and im very exited for the next chapters! Story deserves 5 stars. I dont see anything wrong with the grammar. Author is my friend but that doesnt affect the rating

If you don't show support to your homie, who else will? Besides, the premise of the story is well...for now it deserves 5 star...might decrease later on or might increase.

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doing a quick, is the book still being updated? check

Great potrayal of Yami and relationship with characters seems to be genuine. Good work.

Hey man you are an Indian right? How much did you get in boards? Amazing fanfic!! Are u giving JEE Advanced? I am also a writer and I gotta say I loved your work. I am having trouble managing both writing and and studying for entrance, how r u holding up?

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the story is fine at the moment and the writing quality is very good! same with the character design. for the world background, it needs more chaps to judge it and the author probably is busy maybe That's why he has to upload it in months but is promising so far so I give a 5 star review for that.

very good fanfic I hope the author does not leave it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Right now the book has two covers. The grammar is very good and i haven't noticed any mistakes. The writing style is also above average (not talking about webnovel average since that's just trash). Since onpy two chapters have been updated much cant be said about updating stability, the story seems interesting with Yami from Black Clover going to One Piece. It has a lot of potential to be a good story. Right now only Yami has actually been portrayed (some other bull members too but eh) and it was done very well, doesn't stray from the canon version, this might change later on since Yami will develop in a different way but thats for later. can't say much since he just came out of the womb so the world hasn't been explored yet. All in all it's a good, promising looking story. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂totally original.

. . . Good book for now.