Naruto: I Read It In A Book [COMPLETED]

I, like every 'normal' human being, give myself five stars. I hope you enjoy this story and every review and comment is appreciated! Please give this fanfic a chance :)

The first chapter has No bad grammar, the story development is a 5/5 the character design is good the world background has not been shown yet but I expect it to be good all in all a 5/5 story.

This fanfic is what I like to call Dream tier, because it's such a good fanfic that there's a high chance of it being dropped like many Dream Tiers. Everything from the story development to the world background is just amazing and I highly recommend to read it for yourself. I just hope that the author doesn't abandon it like many other very good fanfics out there left to rot while the the bad ones keeps getting updated.

The story is full of holes and illogical. First, and one of the biggest holes is that Naruto did not use FTG effectively first in his fights, he only used it once in any fight that appeared, for example, against Orochimaru the first time he almost did not use it, although from my point of view and many consider that FTG if used effectively can certainly beat Orochimaru. Secondly, Naruto clearly sayed that he was worried about Itachi, his girlfriend and his family but didn't even think to tag them with FTG mark?? He could always go right in and save Izumi and even confirm his sister's position as an intelligent person he could at least do it but no he didn't. Then there is the whole accusation part. Yamanka can see the memory of a dead body even after its death but they can't check the Hokage's son's memory to confirm his claims?? And the torture part also with Minato as Hokage, the supreme leader in the village. Can't he sit a guard from the ANBU to his son under the excuse of guarding?? Wasn't he able to use this torture as an excuse to move him to another place?? There is a lot that this story misses and you could have made Naruto a villain in easier ways relying on that his reality based only on the books but you got yourself into a illogical drama in order to maximize the effect just sorry but you failed. As a final note, I'm not against Naruto as a villain, but this story went in the wrong direction

The book is simply a master piece but I feel that if I keep reading it will change my view of the world not the shinobi world my world it’s a literal insane master piece

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This fanfic reminds of the relationship joker had with Harley Quinn but this time, Naruto will truly trust Ino just because she was willing to die for him

Reading this, I can say that the author has a very interesting mind. Been quite a while since a novel made me cry. But honestly, this is undoubtedly one of the best novels I've read in a few years .

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I usually don't read fictions with a chapter count lower than 30, but I coincidently made an exception today, and what a good decision it was. The story is good, the writing is better, and the chapters are long enough. I also didn't expect the direction the story took (even though it was heavily foreshadowed) since I haven't read this type of MC in a while. I was also too absorbed to care about what might happen in the future, among other things. It's that good. At this point, I'm addicted.

Good so far slightly. Dislike the MCS lack of hatred towards his parents but overall it's a good story and I hope you don't drop this so it is currently a 5.0 for me

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There are very few stories I keep in mind to re read (I find re reading boring most of the time), this one has made it on that list. I’m not gonna wax poetic or nuthin’ but this one was amazing. There’s some slight Issues in typos every odd chapter but the way the characters and their motivations are done, is great. Huge respect to the author for finishing this.