Absolute Combat: Fanfic

Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section?

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I love the writing style and the world that this book is set in. I have been looking for a good yuri book to read. The fact that it is DC makes it more attractive to read. With regards to the story development, it would be beneficial if there were some chapters on the MC's daily life, character development, relationship development with family, school stuff and love interest development/fluff. This would give the novel a more natural feel and be better overall as it will paint the MC as a more real character and allow the readers to enjoy relating with the MC.

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I like the main characters personality enough to get over the slightly annoying grammatical problems, but the story fundamentally suffers from the main character starting as OP and actually get more OP as the story continues. When the character is already unbeatable why add more OP powers?

love it. hope you continue to write more. ¡!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!???!!!

Fix the lead section m .

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There can be slight improvement in plot and the mc character. Currently she looks indecisive in her dealing of JL. Hiding that she can surbstomp whole league doesn't make sense.

For some reason I have a feeling this doesn’t have a male protagonist

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keep up the good work author the story is good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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