GDI At Nier

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I love this story and hope I see more in the future. C&C and Red alert game is my favorite game. I love to see more story of it.[img=update]

Author, I am giving you such a bad review because your grammar is horrible, edit your story and correct all mistakes. Do not forget the caps, especially for i/I. Don't shorten too much words and names like: IDK, MCV... It looks kinda childish, so their full name at first and maybe second then you can start shortening names (this does not include IDK).

Cool concept bad grammar. Don't know what else to say.

The Ion Cannon Control Center is GDI's superweapon structure in Tiberium Wars and Kane's Wrath. it would be easy to kill machines with that But I love the story CONTINUE ~!

I hope you continue this again its'sbeen so long

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Love the story wish there more like. _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ Thank you for making the story.

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