Video game:I created silent hil scaring game worldwid!

the story would be very interesting if of course wasn't a Chinese fic. sadly it is.and like 99% of these fics they have the racism going on. it seems the transelator instead of cleaning the trash just replace few names to English and copy paste it on Google translate or Ai . the result is this poorly transelated fic. a piece of advice? if you don't have any thing to read. you can turn your brain off and read it otherwise don't even bother. i might sound harsh, all i can say is read the first 10 chapters and judge yourself.

it fascinates me that this could've been an interesting read, if not for the fact that the author couldn't bring out the potential of it. Just like most Chinese written fics

Too Chinese. And what is with the ads every other chapter?

I love this story, but the nationalism is too much. The MC is constantly denying features to people not from his country and changing in-game lore to fit this only "Dragon Kingdom" ideal. I understand its a fanfic, and the author can do whatever they want, but us readings can also do the same.

yo author, what's the raw name?

It's getting difficult to read, it's already the third name of the protagonist, the translator is getting lazy, he doesn't read what he's translating, and it's completely ruining the novel, it seems like there are several protagonists and I keep wondering who this is.

a huge chunk is your usual garbage reactions. I also notice MC and almost everyone were Americans, yet somehow they were Chinese on the inside. China is also meant to be USA and the Great Chinese Kingdom supposed to be China. This seem to be prevalent currently on Hollywood based fanfics where USA were written as China. Anyway TL clearly didn't do shit about it.

you really need to edit the sentences bro it's hard to read if the word use in the sentence does not really work in that sentence

you should totally add mass effect and dragon age into your story they would be amazing in vr. Your doing really well looking forward to the rest of the story keep up the good work.

it's a general ok fic it's Chinese so the standard stuff that comes with it some stuff is annoying but not a deal breaker for a turn your brain off so ya if your finding for a game dev like fic read if not you aren't missing anything grand

I like it but the name are so inconsistent it’s irritating

I'm giving it this because some chapters seem like they're not in the right place. And I'm just getting thrown all over the place, I've read it from the beginning. And I'm still being thrown all over the place.

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it's perfection and I have a liking for this cinds of books so ther is bias the rating is so low becose I can't have enough and want more characters second li names they are so hard becose of them it's hard to now woes prospective I'm seing through I can't even remember the mc's name and I'm 99% shore it changed and this flows are minare don't get discouraged from reading becose the main part is game story telling and that is slow and concise alowing alot of information to enter your mind whitaut to much or any repetition of information