I thought I would die in a much more normal way.
I was drowning. I wasn’t expecting death to knock on my door so soon. Perhaps, this was my destiny and today marks a death anniversary that no one will remember.
It was true about what they said. Your life does flash before your eyes upon death. If life had four seasons, mine was a long winter. I sought the warmth that was never given to me. Or maybe I shut myself out of it.
My inner voice was screaming: Get out of the water and prove to them who you can be! Rewrite your destiny!
But I can no longer summon the strength, my body was getting weaker. If I had the chance to survive, I’d choose a different path. I won’t be that lone tree in the winter anymore. I’d show everyone in the world that they were wrong about me.
A dazzling white light was the last thing I saw. This must be the tunnel of light that brings you to the afterlife…
There was nothing much I treasured about this life except for my identity as Ash Knight. Goodbye Ash Knight, at least someone will remember your glory. Goodbye Lucas, the one that will forever be buried and forgotten.
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Male character in the cover art was an image I found online, if copyrighted please let me know.
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Transmigration doesn't take place immediately, you'll need to read on a little.
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The writing quality is one of the things that first grabbed my attention, its so beautifully written, I got a little engrossed in the side story to. Anyway this is an amazing read I highly recommend.
Fantastic book, the writing quality and chapter leaves me in a different word where I feel like I’m actually experiencing all of this! Such a great novel.
What a great read! The story hits a different note from the prologue but the transition is smooth and engaging. The details on world background are satisfactory. This story has a lot of potential. Author, please update soon, I want to read more!
This is a well-written novel. The narrative is written in a really engaging way. The scene transitions, background, and character introductions are smoothly crafted. The plot is also really interesting.
The second chapter throws you off completely on what the prologue tells you, which was kind of fun to experience. The chapters are a bit short, but the writing was on point with a very fun premise.
Don't let the prologue confuse you, author has definitely planned it for a surprise in ch 2. Tbh I got a little too involved in the side plot for a bit but it was just that interesting. My only issue is that chapters are too short, make them longer please! It has gaming elements + wuxia in it which I really like, so check it out if thats your thing!
This story seems really interesting!! The writing style is great and synopsis is amazing to! It makes you want to read the story more and more! I don't see grammatical error and I appreciate that cause I have a lot of grammatical problems myself ( English isn't my first language) The only problem is that it hasn't much views but don't worry keep updating and I'm sure it'll blow up [img=recommend]
This is good, I don't really like the system kind of story but the words you put in there make it nice to read, that's what I can't, hahaha, so far pretty good story thor, hope you can keep it up more chapters,
I read first few chapters and the story looks already promising. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
There's not a many chapters published but what l came to know after reading those few chapters is that it gonna be a very nice story with a lots of rolarcoaster type of vibe...... The prologue was very touching for me.... And also l always love reincarnation type of story and its also about gaming which l liked the most.... Keep going author.... Hope u gonna upload more in a short time so that l can read more 🤭....
well, this is a good novel having a nice start. but I hope the prologue was a bit longer and would have described more about the world. Overall a good story and great depth of character description is also present. BEST OF LUCK!
Dear author, overall the plot of your story is good, the first chapter was gripping, the way you construct your characters is appreciative.
Ok so the world background is marvelous, the writing is mainly good but there are some minor grammar formatting mistakes here and there, the story is gripping, the characters are well written, and this story is a smooth read. I definitely recommend this to fantasy and eastern fans. I welcome the author to look at my fantasy fanfic "Avatar: Macai's Journey" or its spinoff "Avatar: Macai's Journey".
This is a really interesting read. I love the mystery at every turn of the story. I also really like how the FL isn't overtly swooning over the ML. She exhibits independence and strength in her own way, even if she does think the ML is undeniably hot🤭And I can foresee character developments along the way. Keep writing!
This book is write up my alley... Reincarnation, gaming, and cultivation all in one? Right in the library with Cultivation Online and Xianxia Online. The grammar is expected but for your first work author, you did pretty well. This work has potential. Character design is interesting with creative usernames. This book will become something great. I look forward to it. -CrescentOreo