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The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]
Follow the journey of a different Neji Hyuga, with a different soul, trying to break free of his miserable, chained fate, instead of succumbing to it like in that different, original universe.
What changes would that bring to the Hyuga clan, Konoha, and even the whole Ninja World, in the end?
See a different version of the same story, but with a properly explored and fleshed-out Hyuga clan and Hamura Otsutsuki's side of the equation.
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* Amoral and very goal-oriented MC. Multiple female leads, one of them an OC, but logical for the story.
* The story will definitely deviate from the original plot and events mainly due to the Butterfly Effect.
* More fleshed-out, complete, logical, and realistic (dark) version of the Naruto world.
* Will include some elements from Naruto's light novels, manga, anime fillers, movies, and data books mixed together so as to create the most logical, real-like world in the end.
* Might not include some Boruto explanations, excessive cosmic, Godly elements, or technological stuff and a few characters. So, a bit AU. I will decide what to include and what not at my own discretion and preferences. So, don't complain.
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A/N: I wrote a new high-quality Bleach Fanfiction, go check it from my profile page or the link below if you are interested!
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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/809201/arrancar-ascension-apex-predator-of-hueco-mundo/
I really enjoyed reading, wish there were more chapters. The stories I have recently been reading haven't had the best writing so this was a breath of fresh air.
It was a nice read, even considering the info dumps at the start and grammatical errors here and there, until the stupid deal with orochimaru.
It’s good, please don’t drop. Ughjghjghyfghfgygyndjdjejejejdjdjjejejejejejejejjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjddjjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdndjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjd
I don't really like long explanations so I'll keep this short. The story is good, the character relationships is good though a bit forced, and the writing is also good almost with no errors. My problem is the way the story is going, sure the scenes are properly given explanations and informations but it has TOO much information, the story progression is too fast and the chapter is mostly details in a short scene and that makes it hard to focus on the story
Sometimes I feel like I'm reading the Naruto Wiki and not fanfiction, the information dump ruins the story so much. In a chapter, only 10% is worth reading, the remaining 90% is information that everyone already knows except those who haven't seen Naruto. I'm still going to put 5/5 because the story is really good and I don't want to discourage the author, I just want to make him understand that he has to change his way of writing.
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Love the story. I really wish you would stop with the random dumps on info in the middle of fights. ’Neji’ goes of on a tangent talking about things that people already know, an example of this being a complete recap of what the Rasengan is in the middle of the fight.
It's an entertaining fanfic but I don't like the constant exposition that keeps happening throughout the novel. There are some minor problems with the story as well but overall it's entertaining. At least it doesn't make me feel like I wasted my time reading it. Also apparently author has some sort of superiority complex about himself/herself, that they don't even accept minor criticisms and just write them off as me being low IQ. Oh well, I will see how this story goes in the future. If only to read what the author will do with Tenseigan.
The story is good, but for me author made questionable choises (mainly reverse plot protection) for the story progression. This novel is also a naruto-verse Wikipedia so prepare to skip half of the content. Also, everyone already watched naruto, so I don't understand why the author rewrites things that we already know will happen. Instead of 3 chapters 1 sentence would've been enough...
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I'm reading it on Scribblehub. Although I don't quite like how cold he is and that he doesn't really get to know anyone or open up to anyone, the story is well written. I do wonder, and would like to know, who he intends to end up with. So far he's just using people, he doesn't seem to feel anything for them. Oh and if he wants to end the main branch, does that mean he wants to kill Hinata and Hanabi? Because they're just innocent honestly... Overall well written, but it leave a few questionable holes that I personally don't like..
#spoiler one of the best fanfiction i have read the only i don't like right now is that he doesn't want to kill hinata along with rest of the main branch . i mean if he really wants end main branch then he should kill hinata as well so that no one knows how to activate curse mark and it stops being a threat to him as he still have curse mark on him and he can't keep his tenseigan open 24*7 and hinata can probably tell konoha how to activate curse mark or something and neji will have to keep watch.
Absolute banger of a story very well written and the author knowas what he's doing!
I just finished reading the latest chapter uploaded and to be honest this story is great(until now) and I like the whole idea of the mc taking over neji's body we don't see many fanfictions about the hyuga clan and even in the anime and Manga they get overlooked because the author focuses to much on the Uchiha and their sharingan and I personally like the byakugan more I thought more than once what will happen if you have a taijutsu specialist(+ eight gates) with byakugan (+ gentle fist )mixed together and this is what this author did. - mc is smart - hates the main clan because of the bird cage seal(curse) basically its slavery against the branch clan members - he does some Human Experiments in the latest chapter so he's evil - the chapters are long the only thing that is bothering me is the harem tag until now there wasn't any harem or romance until the latest chapter but there's some hints that tenten loves him but really the story in my opinion don't need any romance I really hope the author doesn't turn this into another harem trash and hopefully the plot don't become all focused on romance.
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