Good story for now I just hope that you do not have courtship or sam, although if you get to have I prefer sam, tory is already super overrated and also very used, and although the character of sam I do not like is more nice than that of tory ... The best thing would be not to mess with any of the 2 since they are characters without more ..
Plis without novices free relationships would be better since he is a protagonist with a mature mind and getting into relationships with younger boys is always a problem
I don't think the novel is bad, but I really don't understand what the author wants to achieve.
He does not develop the life of the characters or relationships, like what he does when he does not train, any interesting relationship apart from the characters in the series know that he exist or where he lives, works, etc..
It does not develop its strength, using the system and its advantages little or giving a minimal vision of what it wants to become.
And it doesn't develop the plot, it doesn't deepen or change the plot, except that the MC exists. It doesn't vary anything or try to explore other changes, it's just there and the same things happen as the series.
But a point in favor is that the personalities of the characters remain faithful and it is good how the story is told.
muito bom ate pra mim que sou do brasil melhor livro
3 months ago
2
Aayush_storms
I really love this cobra kai fic when it stoped i still had it bookmarked if it ever updated. I recommend this to people who see this review. And i request to author to not drop this fic again please.
3 months ago
2
mohamed_gich
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Hasta va bien tiene un fluido rápido pero entretenido además de que la personalidad del mc es entretenida, esperemos y no quede abandonada como todos los demás fanfic de cobra kai que hay en el sitio
Good story for now I just hope that you do not have courtship or sam, although if you get to have I prefer sam, tory is already super overrated and also very used, and although the character of sam I do not like is more nice than that of tory ... The best thing would be not to mess with any of the 2 since they are characters without more .. Plis without novices free relationships would be better since he is a protagonist with a mature mind and getting into relationships with younger boys is always a problem
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I don't think the novel is bad, but I really don't understand what the author wants to achieve. He does not develop the life of the characters or relationships, like what he does when he does not train, any interesting relationship apart from the characters in the series know that he exist or where he lives, works, etc.. It does not develop its strength, using the system and its advantages little or giving a minimal vision of what it wants to become. And it doesn't develop the plot, it doesn't deepen or change the plot, except that the MC exists. It doesn't vary anything or try to explore other changes, it's just there and the same things happen as the series. But a point in favor is that the personalities of the characters remain faithful and it is good how the story is told.
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muito bom ate pra mim que sou do brasil melhor livro
I really love this cobra kai fic when it stoped i still had it bookmarked if it ever updated. I recommend this to people who see this review. And i request to author to not drop this fic again please.
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Great cobra kai fanfic please dont drop 🙏
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Hasta va bien tiene un fluido rápido pero entretenido además de que la personalidad del mc es entretenida, esperemos y no quede abandonada como todos los demás fanfic de cobra kai que hay en el sitio