chigray lingray stingray chingre chingle... he gave JEAN GREY a lot of names huh
2 years ago
25
Kiiiddd
I read ahead on the MTL and while the premise of this novel is interesting the MC is horrible. Turns back 4 days to save someone but misses a important character's death by minutes and says whatever and then proceeds to not care about the fallout.
Like I hate good two shoes protagonists but this one is annoying to read about. Also this is just a straight copy paste of the MTL
2 years ago
13
UNCHAINED_PREDATOR
the story is pretty good but the traslation is almost mtl level
2 years ago
6
Lackada1sical
MTL-style/like translation, too many inconsistencies.
MC 'young-master' type (too Chinese).
typical Chinese marvel mtl fanfic if you know what I mean.
2 years ago
4
Unsightly
Author please change the story, it degenerates into a cultivation world after marvel. I beg you please save this.!!!!!!!!!!:!:!:!:;!!:;!:;!:;!::;!:!:;:'+"7%57$4-%'9*-8'7(&*"
2 years ago
4
brady_robinson
is there any romance or is there not any at all?
2 years ago
2
Higgs
Too many plot holes and inconsistencies, no MC improvements, no sense in the story. You told the readers that it is 24m sec so that's about .76 in years but the title says its 24m hrs so that's about 2739 years. Do you even know how it would feel to stretch time that long in 24hrs? It would be very hard to move. The story didn't imply any special body ability, no friction resistance whatsoever. Increase in speed means increase in mass. Not to mention his clothes should be burning with the friction because of him moving too fast. Asuming that he has the resistance of this type of movement what hasnt he made any improvements? He should be at the very least stronger after 24hrs. Please learn physics or at the very least look at some references, like the flash maybe. It would be understandable if he had the body of a kryptonian but no.
2 years ago
2
Whitedre
the premise is great, but the protag is disgusting. He's one of those nasty Chinese cultivation characters that doesn't care about anything that doesn't directly benefit him. 10mil die because odd flood? What does it have to do with me? Almost kill AO and completely destabilize earth protection while also stealing timestone only for self benefit. Trash personality.
2 years ago
1
HeavenlyGodOfMagic
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chigray lingray stingray chingre chingle... he gave JEAN GREY a lot of names huh
I read ahead on the MTL and while the premise of this novel is interesting the MC is horrible. Turns back 4 days to save someone but misses a important character's death by minutes and says whatever and then proceeds to not care about the fallout. Like I hate good two shoes protagonists but this one is annoying to read about. Also this is just a straight copy paste of the MTL
the story is pretty good but the traslation is almost mtl level
MTL-style/like translation, too many inconsistencies. MC 'young-master' type (too Chinese). typical Chinese marvel mtl fanfic if you know what I mean.
Author please change the story, it degenerates into a cultivation world after marvel. I beg you please save this.!!!!!!!!!!:!:!:!:;!!:;!:;!:;!::;!:!:;:'+"7%57$4-%'9*-8'7(&*"
is there any romance or is there not any at all?
Too many plot holes and inconsistencies, no MC improvements, no sense in the story. You told the readers that it is 24m sec so that's about .76 in years but the title says its 24m hrs so that's about 2739 years. Do you even know how it would feel to stretch time that long in 24hrs? It would be very hard to move. The story didn't imply any special body ability, no friction resistance whatsoever. Increase in speed means increase in mass. Not to mention his clothes should be burning with the friction because of him moving too fast. Asuming that he has the resistance of this type of movement what hasnt he made any improvements? He should be at the very least stronger after 24hrs. Please learn physics or at the very least look at some references, like the flash maybe. It would be understandable if he had the body of a kryptonian but no.
the premise is great, but the protag is disgusting. He's one of those nasty Chinese cultivation characters that doesn't care about anything that doesn't directly benefit him. 10mil die because odd flood? What does it have to do with me? Almost kill AO and completely destabilize earth protection while also stealing timestone only for self benefit. Trash personality.
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