A Prince of House Targaryen

What a snooze fest. 4 chapters just to introduce the Mc, and another 10 spent on nothing but Catlyn hating on Jon and us watching him cry There’s been no plot or progress from what I’ve seen, and to top it all off the author decides to make John talk to the three eyed raven and sheet. I want the 1-2hrs of my life I spent reading this back. OR you can tell me when your story starts.

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An amazing story!! This is truly an amazing piece of writing. I would recommend that you post your stores on other sites as well so more people can enjoy them! Questionable Questing, SpaceBattles, Sufficient Velocity, and AlternateHistory are all sites that you should post on!

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well it is a well written story but it is hard to follow because author (in particular before chapter 13) likes to put flashbacks/visions/description of dreams everywhere randomly and without any warning(not even leaving some space). the plot is filled with a subtle bashing of some characters; there are a lot of inner monologues and it is filled with lots of drama including forced one that lead to some part of the stories to seem stupid and forced. But the most irksome thing is the presence of yuri without a tag and it involves the potential future love interests of the mc who got involved with each other heavily even before seeing the mc in person. So it is not the worst reading but it is also not the best: overall an above average work for patient people (it is slow paced) who like/can overlook random cringeness, foolishness and yuri contents. it is also needed the mood to follow a complicated dramstic plotline

I'm not interested simply because I hate Lyanna Stark and the prince, but well everyone with their tastes, I would have made an oc character as the prince's brother so it would make more sense for them to win because the prince really had no way of winning that rebellion

GOOD

Very good fanfic looking forward to new chapters Pls update more frequently Pls don’t dropp 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

have u stop making attack on titan fanfic? it's really good

Ottimo sviluppo della storia. Tutto cambia per non cambiare niente in realtà. Come fosse una storia ciclica. E del resto la cosa è perfettamente lineare. Unico neo è che se da un lato jon sembra una persona ben più maturata rispetto alla versione Canon poi appena ritrova i Targaryen sembra troppo attaccato loro.

Honest review... I read this fanfic and I was very impressed... more so with the storyline... very nicely written. I even got waters in my eyes reading some emotional chapters... Just updates are slow

A Piece Of Art. Nothing More, Nothing Less.

If boring had a definition This is it !!The good thing is world background is nicely developed ..

So far tho is the best and closest to the source material of GOT, I’ve ever read. The multiple POV the political intrigue, the settings. Great work author. Just more frequent chapters