A promising story with an interesting plot. Storyline is a bit average though. And your grammar could use a little more work, especially in your usage of paragraphs. Keep it up author and continue to do a good job.
2 years ago
1
KayLillyt_1
Fascinating. That goes for the plot, the writing style and the characters. They’re very well done. This hooks the readers immediately. Good job author.
2 years ago
0
Tokio999
Great beggining and it’s really good even though there’s still some mistake but keep goingg. Looking forward to the next chapter comming up👍🏻
A promising story with an interesting plot. Storyline is a bit average though. And your grammar could use a little more work, especially in your usage of paragraphs. Keep it up author and continue to do a good job.
Fascinating. That goes for the plot, the writing style and the characters. They’re very well done. This hooks the readers immediately. Good job author.
Great beggining and it’s really good even though there’s still some mistake but keep goingg. Looking forward to the next chapter comming up👍🏻