Author here, I am new to writing as well as English is not my first language so there might be some grammar mistakes but I will try to find any and all once I am sure of what to do with this story.
Thanks for reading. Please like if you found this enjoyable, comment any suggestions you have they are most welcome 🙏. Also support if you are able to.
Thanks and Regards,
UnluckyMortal
2 years ago
2
Utstrtdtbtmt
Good start, unique concept need to see if execution is good or not. Not giving the main character a name before he was given a name was a good touch. Looking forward to what this new spin on already exhausted genere gives us. Keep going.
2 years ago
1
Madhabi_Tarafdar
Good story so far, so giving 5 Star to keep you going. Please correct the spelling and grammar mistakes though.
Story can use a bit less descriptions according to me, but till now it's good keep going and make it good so this review does not goes to West.
Author here, I am new to writing as well as English is not my first language so there might be some grammar mistakes but I will try to find any and all once I am sure of what to do with this story. Thanks for reading. Please like if you found this enjoyable, comment any suggestions you have they are most welcome 🙏. Also support if you are able to. Thanks and Regards, UnluckyMortal
Good start, unique concept need to see if execution is good or not. Not giving the main character a name before he was given a name was a good touch. Looking forward to what this new spin on already exhausted genere gives us. Keep going.
Good story so far, so giving 5 Star to keep you going. Please correct the spelling and grammar mistakes though. Story can use a bit less descriptions according to me, but till now it's good keep going and make it good so this review does not goes to West.