Raiju of the Salvatore Boarding School
Author: Grimm_48
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What if Landon isn't Hope's fated love and after a surprising awakening she finds herself falling more and more for someone she never thought possible? pairing: Hope x OC with lightning abilities
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Mc bigest simp in world.. He simp for Hope .. And I dont know why. And when Hope play with London and broke Mc heart he like stupid dog lick her feet time and time again.
Update stability and Writing quality pretty good(4 ⭐) Pretty same story as the original(2 ⭐) World background/MC background overused hunter trope with no development (2 ⭐) Hate character design (simp) has been going after Hope for 5 years no chances pathetic. (1 ⭐).
It's ok... enjoyable if you like legacies. The spelling is good with few mistakes, however, the sentences are simplistic and the story relies too much on dialogue compared to complex descriptive sentences. This results in the story feeling wooden and too similar to the show. The main character is pretty pathetic and not how I think he should be portrayed. Sosuke, the mc, is an ex-KGB assassin and yet he gives off nervous and for lack of a better word simp vibes, he could be trying a number of different methods to get with hope but he simply chooses to pine after her instead. overall he's been disappointing but I'm holding out hope because I like legacies and truly want this fanfic to succeed.
Simp and loser emo MC whinny about no one liking him and only his beautiful princess likes him fking pathetic. MC is not strong at all. No lightning powers have been developed yet, so MC is also weak, so it is NOT an overpowered MC. just bad.
The Mc is such a simp, hope treats him like dirt and he just takes it and does nothing while being at her beck and call while ignoring the girls around him who wouod good for him
Rename the title to the tale of a cu#k made a mistake of not reading reviews and jumping in it .. Hope others don't do this ...
Great story so far, I like the slow progress and the development between the MC and hope. he has had his own issues and hasn't had the timing to truly initiate any true attempt for romance. his life has been a whirlwind so far and he hasn't tried to worm in on her relationships, especially having zero experience with romance until now. anyone thinking otherwise is just foolish. Definitely love the origin story and his slow change into who he is from what he was. Keep it up, great work!
nice story though a little more character development would be nice
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