Reincarnation of the Cross
This book is returning in 2 months time with a revamp, better grammar, experience and everything. So, please wait.
Even magicless, my desire to level up surpasses the gods themselves. Let them fear me!
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Luciel was so powerful that he was feared and respected by the rest of humanity, earning him the title of Demon Lord.
This caused him to feel alienated.
For some mysterious reason, he split his essence into two, creating a new beginning. What this new beginning was, however, remained a mystery.
Nyx Besimios, a doppel phenomenon of Luciel's actions, and the Di-Primordials must now discover it on their own. Nyx is also attending Excelsior, the prestigious magic academy of his continent, while trying to balance his studies and the conflicting story of fantasy, magic, war, and romance.
It may seem far-fetched, but Nyx is confident that he can manage both, as he is the boy with no magic.
His world presents so many dangers he knows not of, and how else does he plan to get stronger other than by the use of his intellect that far surpassed the normal individual. Hailed as the 0 prodigy his story is one that may well become legend.
After Nyx almost dies of mana depletion, a System was created in order for him to stay alive.
It came in form of the unique skill 【Oracle Engine】
⎾Congratulations! You have unlocked the system of infinite knowledge.⏌
Thanks to Scentia, the Oracle Engine, the entire world has become a mana reservoir for Nyx as he can now source or "cultivate" from his surroundings. Nearly possessing - Infinite Mana.
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Things to note about this novel.
• It's really good, but didn't necessarily start off well. According to some readers the dialogues lacked substance. I fixed that in later chapters.
• It's first person point of view. But I found third person much more appealing and changed to it from chapter 52.
• It's a strong magic system so yes, there are no plot holes to point out, I dare you to find one if you can.
• I was still a newbie when I started this book, so yeah, there are a lot of errors involving tenses. Not my strong suit, but I'm patching it up.
• Enjoy the novel, I have constant updates so support me however way you can and manage it please, even if you believe it's not up to your reading taste. Because later on it gets way too good.
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One of my biggest inspiration for this novel is 'The Demon Lord is reincarnated as a typical nobody' so the start of the anime help me set things in motion. Then weirdly branched into something even I couldn't control.
I hope you guys enjoy the novel and support me as it's a WSA entry.
Novel cover is not mine, if it is to be removed I have no problem with it...
Excuse my shamelessness lol, but I believe this is a good book it just depends on how you view stories and hope to gain better understanding of a character. If you want a properly developing story with an acceptable system of knowledge then you're in the right place. The story has a good pacing as well as a strong MC which I'm sure you'll like, take your time and enjoy this journey with me...
The realism is what makes the novel good, the manner with which the MC describes his emotions and how he levels up with logic I was most impressed with Scentia -- the Oracle Engine it's a "unique" ability that you rarely come across. The novel itself looks like System and at the same time isn't so I understand the tags used.
Dear author, I must say that your novel has caught my attention with its intriguing concept and plot. I encourage you to keep going with the direction you feel is right for the story, and trust in your instincts as a writer. Remember to focus on developing your characters and their motivations, as this will create a strong foundation for the plot to unfold. Additionally, exploring the themes and underlying messages of your story can add depth and resonance to the narrative. Overall, I wish you the best of luck with your novel and look forward to reading more of your work.
1) Quality of writing - 4. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3,1. 4) Character design - 2,7 5) background of the world - 3,4. 6) Overall rating - 3,7
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That's an AMAZING plot! I loved it, and despite a few punctuation and grammar issues, the story hooked me right from the start! I just think the paragraphs could be a little shorter, to make the reading a bit more dynamic. Despite that, chef's kiss!
I think that this is an interesting and novel novel. Mc splitting himself into two and then managing then brings freshness to the already used up reincarnation and other elements. I am excited to see where this is going to go and excited to learn how the double mc is going to utilize this to his advantage. Good Luck Author!
Really good world building, to the point it gives the story 4 points on it's own, characters are ok, but do feel a bit one-dimensional at times, however the story progression is the worst part, somehow completely filled with the background of the world to the point the actual story feels unimportant, it gets better later on but its still a problem. In resume: Story has a lot of potential especially in the world build, but while it did deliver a good story, it didn't live up to what that world needed.
Good Story . I love the way the author tells the story . It just gives more emotion and perspective . The plot is also very unique . I was hook up and did not get bored reading it.
I wholeheartedly endorse this book. Without a doubt, you ought to look it up! I'm only reading the few chapter of this book, so I can only judge it, but I have to commend Sypnosis for being the first chapter that actually grabbed my attention. I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic.
reading status 5/5 27/3/23 Dear author I saw your comment somewhere so I checked out your profile and I found this,your writing skills highly appreciated and the plot is also very nice,storyline Idk yet because I've just read 1st chapter and I'm here to hive you a review giving you five stars for your hard work 😩❤🤝 keep writing 😊 Check out mine too
GREAT STORY WITH INTRIGUING AND UNIQUE CONCEPTS AND PLOT. I CAN SEE A LOT OF HEART AND EMOTION HAS BEEN PUT INTO THIS NOVEL. I LOVE THE WAY EVERYTHING IS WRITTEN WITH LOGIC. GREAT NOVEL, HIGHLY RECOMMENDED
The writing is genius each and every single word carries meaning and emotion The story itself seems like it's a story an actual story and not something like the usual I've been reincarnated or I have system its just a wonderful story . impeccable writing The mystery and the lore that surrounds the story will hook you. I wish you luck author.
love the plot story. so psyched to see what's gonna happen next
oh my word I really love how humbl he is! can't wait for the next episode