Supernatural: The Great Hunter System

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Author: Millan_Grimm
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Drifting across the infinite well of chaos, a being made of light and of death scoured the abyss using its omniscient knowledge before finally settling on a tiny little egotistical soul whose death embarrassed even him, a nigh invincible being of primordial existence. Granting the soul powers beyond its human-like comprehension, the being of ash and blood set it adrift towards its other little creation. A slice of... heaven. Of excitement. Chuck chuckled before chucking himself back to the main universe, chortling giddily for he had set loose an abomination on the Winchester's on this universe, nor any other universe, had never seen before.

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BrokenandBored123
BrokenandBored123

Rapid change of pov, an mc that changes personality every five seconds and cringe dialogue make this almost unreadable.

2 months ago
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YoureABum
YoureABum

the story is decent but you really don't know what kind of MC you are dealing with. hes made good choices, stupid ones, and questionable ones. he seems to be a bit of a slave to the system as well sometimes and it reflects in the choices he makes. I feel like he's headed toward the cliche morally ambiguous MC that's been extra popular on this app. problem is a story without a framework and without boundaries usually starts losing its steam after losing its mystery. Story is predictably unpredictable, usually by adding a twist at the end up chapters by leaving readers out of the MCs thought process when he makes certain choices earlier in the story. seems like a cheap writing trick but just writing is impressive in its own right. Story is still pretty new so my review might change later. Story is overall pretty good and id suggest giving it a read before judging it.

a year ago
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IINeeRoII
IINeeRoII

Welcome back Bro. I was waiting for an update. Hope you can finish this book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

4 months ago
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Andrew_Alsbrooks
Andrew_Alsbrooks

epic start bro keep it going................

a year ago
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JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPicking

I'm just making it 10...XD 4|4|4|4|5 (cough... I'm a bit partial because there weren't many supernatural fics lately...longer ones at least) I read this a while back, it got kinda mid. Also, I thought it was dropped. i might change the review after rereading it...

a month ago
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jaro_onody
jaro_onody

personaly not a fan of changing the pow every couple lines, it makes the story feel super slow , other than that abit unneeded details like pow from the maid and his sister this just made me skip alot of dialogs. not realy a fan of this writeting where 70% of the chapters dialog is from a side character ,only readed 10chap hope it changes somwhat. otherwise very desent

3 months ago
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Daoist669967
Daoist669967

Sinceramente a história estava aceitável até o capítulo 81 e depois daí eu n tive nenhuma vontade de ler mais, muito clichê, n gosto de MC com complexos de Deus q se coloca em situações impossíveis onde tudo acontece de forma a acabar com qualquer preparação possível p ensinar algum tipo de lição absurdamente estúpida pra o MC, sinceramente achei q fosse ter um aneurisma... Mesmo assim foi uma boa história até o ponto q n quis ler mais.

3 days ago
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Maluop
Maluop

Good story but the dialogue is choppy and confusing at times

3 months ago
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MRCAT66
MRCAT66

It's great to see another supernatural writer,I have my own supernatural FanFiction but it's a bit low,I started following yours recently and I hope I can get some inspiration from it,thank you very much......❤️❤️

3 months ago
1
ShatteredMusic
ShatteredMusic

A great book with a consistent story and long chapters. Some grammatic errors but it doesn't take away from the story

3 months ago
1
CreationGODBlack
CreationGODBlack

nah man you have really got to never give up on this book,,,, it's a work of pure genius I love it,,,,hey now you gotta promise you'll finish it or else🫵🏾,,,,keep up the good work

4 months ago
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