The Devil's Entice

This is a piece of strong writing, you could feel the emotion of the characters and uses descriptive language to portray what's going on, it's so vivid and each paragraph is coherent, running at a good pace. It uses more showing than telling and is executed perfectly. The introduction is intriguing enough to force readers to flip to the next page.

wow the story of devil and angel really loving it heheheh heheh. Waiting for more chapters. Keep it up author [img=recommend][img=recommend]

It's a new concept for me but the writing style is interesting and easy to understand. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work.

The novel doesn't align with my tastes, be it in pacing or the premise. That said, it is above average in terms of written quality and planning. As of chapter 7, there was already a certain pull. The butler low-key carries most of the burden as far as intrigue goes. All in all, it's worth checking out if you're a fan of the subdued-femlead genre. You won't lose anything by reading a few chapters, and might just find yourself a new favorite. Good luck.

The start is interesting and the flow is good, can't wait to read next chapters. Keep up the good work author

I like this book, the start is very interesting and it piqued my interest, can't wait to read more

One of the best reads I came across in a while. Can’t wait to see how the story developes ☺️

A hot and steamy work, room for improvements but that is due if author keeps on writing it. There is potential in this book and could cater to a lot of readers. keep it up.

Here's my initial review: 1. The story is indeed a slow burn 2. The summary is very intriguing 3. Explanation and world building is to top point 4. The writing seemed realistic 5. Writing flow seemed consistent and easy to understand 6. Plot development is also good 7. Character design is well done Overall, It's a highly recommended book

No words to say....the writing is so realistic and very descriptive that i can imagine every tidbit. I am in love with this book and I can't wait to read other chapters.....Author!!! give mass release please. This is so addicting and I love this angel and devil aka Satan combo....i want more of their past story ...the summary is so hooking

I'm really excited about the development of this novel! I've only read the first three chapters, but already I'm hooked. The world the author has created is amazing, full of magic and adventure. The characters are really interesting, and the story is full of surprises. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters and find out what happens next. Bookmarked and eagerly anticipating the release of more chapters!!!!

The story is good. Each chapters are very well done and it's pretty interesting to read. Food luck author for future endeavors and keep it up!

A unique concept I have never witnessed, I must say. The plot seems cliche but is unfolded differently than other novels, affecting the vibe the work gives off. The novel itself is incredibly enjoyable, even if one isn't familiar with other works of the same genre. The writing quality is interesting and matches the gist of the story, which is what is usually preferred. Keep up the good work, author!

Cool one, i would say.. nice story nice world building characters are good but can be improved, English is understandable and story is also progressing great overall good stuff. looking forward to it.