BL When you transmigrate to other times
"The world is full of mystery. I've heard that all my life and it seems to be true. But if I go through something mysterious myself, will I be believed? Maybe I'll think I'm crazy, or everything that happens to me in my everyday life is just something I'm dreaming and soon I'll wake up. Questions without answers..."
Everything changes after he returns from a pilgrimage to a miraculous statue of the Holy Virgin Mary, when he becomes the victim of a plane accident in which, with no hope left, he prays alongside the other passengers, gives his final blessing, and then... And then what?
He wakes up on a bench. Where exactly? Right in the heart of the most important square in the world, in Rome, caput mundi, as the Latins used to say. What is he doing there? He remembered the airplane accident, but he also had other memories. How did he get here, what year is it? He was at the Vatican, but still... Is it the year 1492?!
This novel has potential with the plot, world background and character development. I'm intrigued by the characters and their background stories plus the world Antonio transmigrated back to. It's not the same type of world he's used to, so it'll be fun to read about his struggle to adapt and the misunderstandings that he'll experience. Overall grammar and spelling is good with only some minor errors. Will update once more chapters are posted and more of the plot is revealed. Keep up the good work!
Quite a good book, TBH. Just a little corrections to some errors, here and there and it would be good to go. Again, I love the introduction and the character development. The plot as well also. Don't stop, keep trying and keep up the updates. This book has a good scale of potential in it.
supporting a fellow writer!, the story is fascinating and I've been waiting for the updates. can't wait to see more![img=recommend]