Gangsta's paradise
#r18 #weaktostrong #enemiestolovers #mafia #ceo #bl #yaoi #richfamily #forbiddenlove
A young mafia man in his twenties, Miguel, meets another young man of similar age in a bar and like him at first sight. Miguel continues to pursue this young man until he convinces him to work for him as a bodyguard, so the relationship between them develops, and one of them falls in love with the other, then many problems arise between them, and feelings of hatred mixed with feelings of love develop. On the other hand, a young man and a teenager try not to fall in love with each other because of their age difference, but will they wait for each other until age is no longer an obstacle?
A lot of interesting events, a lot of feelings and problems, follow the novel until the picture becomes clear to you!
Continue! You're doing great as a new writer! There is an idea, you are making it more like a drama but it would be better if you came up with some action scenes, more fights and gangs' issues.
I gave you 4/5 on the writing quality just because there are some grammar mistakes but it doesn't really affect the story, 4/5 on story development because you're kinda making it long but with few events, 5/5 on characters design I love how you described each one's personality not to mention their beautiful portraits, 4/5 on updating stability because you don't update daily but it also doesn't affect the story. I love the plot and I love your writing, as a new author you are amazing!