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Overall it was a great story. It set a curious flame in the reader's mind. I found the character sketch quite good. Once I started I couldn't stop until the end of the story.

I am quite interested to know how they got separated and what would happen in future chapters. Eagerly waiting for a new series. The characters are getting along well. I have always liked books that had childhood friends with a dark past (looking forward for it to unfold).

The villain character seems to be powerful, it really sinks us deep in to a kind of horror and grief. From the begining as the story progress the thread of Suspence tie us tightly with a big Knot , becoming even more interesting.

The twists in the story are growing my curiosity. It makes me want to read more. I like how the story is realistic at the same time not a very common thing that could just happen to anyone. I will continue reading it.

An engaging story, from the beginning to the end. Waiting for the next part to see how eventually everything unfolds. The author has a great story telling talent at such a young age.Keep writing.

The story is very nice . It is good that you find time to do all of this while still going to school. You have good talent , develop them and you will reach very high places .

What an impressive book! It's remarkable to see the creativity and imagination from a young author, I'm amazed by the talent and dedication put forth. Hoping to read more books written by you. Well done!