Stark evolution
Author: Charlottess
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In the film «Iron Man», Tony Stark, with a magnet in his chest, manages to survive a nine-storey fall after plummeting into a Mark-I scrap metal exoskeleton. However, what if, as popular belief suggests, the average person would not have survived such an ordeal? And what if at that moment, the sorcerer's symbol were to merge with him...
Translation from Russian. Original Russian author: prometei33
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i really enjoy this is funny and interesting how a lot of situations born on different ways and about the " racism" i think is normal to say someone that is black black and someone who is fat fat and someone who is stupid stupid is just a word is sad to see how the people change the meaning of just a word to pretend insult someone but is just the mind of the people in these days that make that possible...why you are prettending be offended just for that is ridiculous.if someone fat assault your house you say fat of **** there are a problem? if someone with any kind of skin assault your house and you **** on him there are a problem ? if you found someone uncivilized during a jorney in the jungle and you call them wild is incorrect for you ? if you see someone who likes the same gender and you call them homosexual is incorrect ? is really for the people learn the meaning of the words to describe something without any charge subjetive during his life ?
I normally don’t care about translations specifically because, contrary to popular belief, there’s racists in every nation and creed. I happened to read this one because I figure I’d give it a chance. That was a bad decision. The hard r was dropped with no build up. Apparently Tony Stark gets racist when Wakandans are involved.
I got up to chapter 19 When a really ooc racial slur popped up No idea if its the author or translators fault but yea... It's okay I was just kinda going through it on a lazy day but meh
I haven't started reading it yet but I gave stars because it's synopsis is very confusing. Is it a pure machine translation??
Thank's, the translation is amazing unlike common mtl!Give it a try.
I just read Chapter 1 of Stark Evolution, and wow, that opening grabbed me immediately. The way you describe the adamantium capsule floating through the primordial chaos, it’s poetic, hypnotic, and so cinematic. I had chills just picturing reality melding into unreality around it. I can see it unfolding as a two-page spread: one page shows an outward shot of the sleek capsule gliding through a surreal vortex of storming colors and shifting shapes, time, space, all blending. Then flip to the interior: the capsule’s inner magic, with a crystal holding the spirit of reason, a drop of half-titan blood, and dark mana swirling in the obsidian reservoir. The contrast between sterile protection and chaotic surroundings would make for an unforgettable visual moment. I’m a commissioned comic and manga cover artist, and I’d love to help bring that striking scene to life if you’d be open to it. No pressure at all, I just think it’s got incredible visual and narrative potential. You can reach me on Discord (elsaa_uwu) or email me at elsaauwuu@gmail.com. I’d be thrilled to chat more if you're up for it! Cheers, Elsa