This is the Fan-made story of My hero Academia universe where the story begins from deku's son toshinori midoriya who was qwerkless as him, it's not the story of qwerkless boy who gain power and achieved his dream but the story of a boy who lost his dream and prove everyone.
Brother….no spaces, terrible grammar, mispelling everywhere the idea is good but the attempt….
This is terrible I had a stroke reading this
Great story I guess, as people sue to say "The more time we spend on that thing the more better we get". So dont give up keep it up Author im sure you improve from time to time, for me overall the story was great but there is misspelling and and wrong grammar but Im sure its fine.
this sh#t is hard to read but the story is interesting enough to power through
Improve the pov and make an character introduction chapter