Kaito Akaden (Kaito)
Hey everyone, I'm changing the fanfic name from 'Kaito' to 'Kaito Akaden.' Don't worry, I'm still the same author, I just felt that the new name suits the story better than just plain 'Kaito,' ya know? So, going forward, it will be 'Kaito Akaden.' P.S. 'Akaden' means 'Red Lightning,' which is Kaito's signature jutsu.
What if Naruto had a brother who was the same age as Itachi and also happened to be a reincarnation from another world,
In an alternate timeline, a soul from our world is reborn as Uzumaki Kaito, the eldest son of Minato and Kushina. Kaito inherits his mother's distinctive hair color and his father's facial features, including his captivating blue eyes. Born into the same generation as Itachi, Kaito is armed with knowledge of the future. Witness his unwavering determination as he endeavors to protect and safeguard his beloved family.
OCXRTNHinata but as Hinata's elder sister."Hotaru Hyuga"
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i admit minato is strong shinobi but when compared to otsutsuki he is pretty weak so the mc should focus on getting strong er then otsutsuki
This fanfic focuses on cannon to much to be truly enjoyable however its a decent time waster to due the author's good grammar and a above average MC just his obsession with naruto is shown a bit to much early on like naruto is his only hope like really?
The only good thing about the story is the writing and i like how mc trains and develops his jutsu but thats about it the story itself is not existing nothing is changed from the original and mc iq drops to -100 when its time to change the plot. Very frustrating to read and i hate that i wasted my night on reading this story
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No changes and constantly stating he cant find a way to change things so he will have to just hope. So dumb.
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Considering that nothing changed and the mc was just agonizing on it while commiting only minimal actions to change things, I think you should just skip the things you don't want to change until the part where you want to make changes. You know, people will just accuse you of rehashing canon.
It is by far one of the fanfics I have read. The main character is really very satisfying. He is more than just an idiot. I recommend it to everyone who wants to read it.
El mejor fanfic que eh leído se apega a la obra original pero cuenta una nueva historia definitivamente está en mi top de fanfic en general. Excelente obra
The novel progresses at a very slow pace, particularly during the training sections. You could easily skip through these parts by reading just a few paragraphs to get the general idea. The main story truly begins with Naruto's birth, though some chapters following this are quite tedious. Additionally, I hope to see some romance incorporated into the storyline to enhance its appeal. well that's my take on this novel. Rest is up too you to decide
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Alright so I have read up to chapter 36, and first of all I would say it is worth the read in my opinion. As of now it is following the cannon of the story but there was a slight change to the story up to the point of Naruto’s birth. There are readers complaining that the MC is not doing anything to change the story but he’s only 5 years old when things go wrong. He trains and does his best but we have to understand are the adults going to listen to a 4 year olds rambling? Yeah no. The author portrays the characters personalities quite well and the writing is well structured. MC has a lot of potential and isn’t OP from the start but works his way up in a way that wants you to root for him.I like the rivalry that is going on with itachi and the MC as of now. I am enjoying the story so far so I would recommend you give it a chance
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I'm blown away by your SI fanfic! It's the best I've ever come across. Your writing style is captivating, and your ideas are truly original. Keep up the amazing work!
There are, in my opinion, a few issues concerning how the main character behaves. He is portrayed as a cunning and wise character. However, he tends to act rash and only seem cunning because everyone else somehow forgets they posses thinking capacity of their own when he speaks. Besides that, his personality is an odd and somewhat unbalanced mix between a child and an adult.