Twilight : Justice for Jacob

Twilight : Justice for Jacob

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Author: The3Entities
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A primordial entity who is a fan of human creations has decided to create an alternative reality to correct certain mistakes made in the writing of his favorite secondary characters. Here he will try to create a different Jacob from the pitiful puppy of the original films to give him the direction that he deserves.

I don't own any main characters from this franchise except two or three characters that I'm going to create. The cover picture is not mine and I hope the author doesn't come after me and kill me for borrowing it. This fanfiction is an English version of the one posted on my second account which is unfortunately inaccessible now. English is not my first language so there will definitely be syntactic mistakes so bear with me.

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TheHandOfAuthor
TheHandOfAuthor

Good one, but I demand Justice for Grammar...

a year ago
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SHCH7
SHCH7

So he remains a simp, always jumping hoops for Bella and the Cullens. Loses the girl he loves twice. Fights his brothers for the Cullens, and still imprints on Renesmee.... He's an even bigger simp than canon.

a year ago
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BIG_BAD_WOLF2000
BIG_BAD_WOLF2000

From one author to another, you have my appreciation. Short but fulfilling, well executed, not boring at all, keep writing you are a natural, you should also do an original story.

8 months ago
2
TheQueen_foxy_270
TheQueen_foxy_270

loved tge book.one of my favourite twilight novels ❤️thanks, author. great work.👍

a year ago
2
Hellcat1963
Hellcat1963

Absolutely love this fanfic.❤️ Keep up the great work.

a year ago
2
Zachary_Winter
Zachary_Winter

Reveal Spoiler

2 months ago
1
ForeVver
ForeVver

Vamos lá, a história é boa se você ignorar as inconsistências da trama, mas tirando isso é muito bom para uma leitura rápida.

8 months ago
1
cluelessauthor
cluelessauthor

another fantastic story, just wow. characters, suspense, twists all somehow crammed into 20 chapters. this story is an excelent read even if you don't love the twilight franchise

8 months ago
1
Novel_Lover_2360
Novel_Lover_2360

This was amazing ❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.....

a year ago
1
Kaheem_Edmonds
Kaheem_Edmonds

this was very good and I like the Danielle girl and the fact Seth and found love for change

a year ago
1
InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2

Gostei muito do livro, foi uma nova experiencia. Não existe muitos livros que seja continuado igual ao desse autor Espero que continue com o magnifico trabalho, e continue a melhorar cada dia mais.

a year ago
1
Lordkael
Lordkael

great story, would not have ended it like that but I respect what you did there, it's perfectly understandable. Thanks for this, this is a great story, I recommend it.

2 days ago
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Lilith_Demontre
Lilith_Demontre

Reveal Spoiler

4 days ago
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Blueflameh
Blueflameh

It’s an alright fanfiction, honestly not bad but not my cup of tea. The pacing of the story feels like you’re reviewing a movie by fast forwarding the slightly less but still important parts while only hitting the main plot points. So it takes a lot from the potential of the story. It’s how I imagine my own fanfic writing feels the others. Where you get the main points but not much passed that. So overall not bad, but I’m not going to say it’s good. Pretty mid but overall if you enjoy twilight you might enjoy it, if you don’t like twilight then… I’d say you can go without reading this.

2 months ago
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LoneWolf_3000
LoneWolf_3000

it was a good read just have to look past all the grammar mistakes

4 months ago
0