Marvel's Black Steel
Nothing special, it's just that your average nigga end's up dying while following his heart as he protects a woman from rape; you know, the usual BS. Dude ends up dying, only to reincarnate in a world full of people that can destroy universes on a whim, and all that other crazy stuff, lucky for our MC, he happens to meet a chill yet powerful being that reincarnates him with the potential of the strongest version of Superman; Superman Prime One-Million.
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Would like to point out, MC won't be an edgy villain or anything of the sort; he's got a good heart, and will be raised by kindhearted parents, though as it is the marvel universe and the not the goody two shoes DC universe, he will kill people, though, only when absolutely required to. Also, this novel is a slightly slow, so you've been warned.
Ps. I've set this novel up for both a Harem and Non-Harem route, so really it depends what ya'll want, so you gotta let me know; though like I said, the novel is a little slow on the uptake, so don't expect that much romance in the beginning.
I also haven't read any of the marvel comics, so all of my knowledge is coming from the movies and wiki-fandom, so don't expect me to get super in depth on comic lore.
Although I know this kind of novel has been done several times before, I've only read like two that I really fucked with, so I wanted to make my own, hopefully ya'll enjoy and if you do, might as well leave a review
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pls pls pls i begg of you don't make it harem!!!!!!!!
I'm afraid that the author is racist, or exercises clichés, in fact the N-word appears too often, and in the last chapter he refers to the mc's mother as being Asian and therefore not being a easy mother. I continue reading for the moment, but I have an unpleasant feeling while doing so. ps: although this is the name of a member of your pharaoh family, it's really a rotten name, in fact the number of people who will find this name pleasant or cool seems extremely limited to me, you should have started place of your readers, first names like Atom, Iron, Odin... for a guy who doesn't come from a normal family it's too weird, already his real name is Kal El it's more than offbeat enough. ps2: in the chapters the mc does not at any time refer to his surprise at being in the mcu, or at being friends with jean and gwen, which is not normal in the mcu. he should ask himself the questions, it's a shame to have skipped that.
This is a white guy writing how they think black people act
Yo I’m glad to FINALLY find a story I can actually relate to🙌🏾not once have I found a fanfic with a black mc until now. I think your doing a good job too cus this is exactly how I imagine myself acting/thinking like if I got reincarnated with OP powers🤣💯this story is really good so I hope it doesn’t get dropped. & I also hope you make more stories with black mc’s 💯💪🏾🫡 Ps. If you know any other fanfic with black mc’s let me know ✊🏾
it was going pretty good till you made Sara the gf..
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the whole thing can be called a filler, there's basically no story going on only slice of life banter/talk even when a chance comes to make a nice action or intense moment/scene author throws more slice of life taking any potential out of the picture WQ 4 SofB 4 SD 1 CD 3 WB 2
of all the girl choices in Marvel.... Why did you even pair your MC with your OC (Jean's older sister), who probably doesn't even matter in a fanfiction story. There are options like MJ, Felicia and even Jean herself. Ugh...
he made it a harem in the end, haaaaah tis a sad day
MC has a stupidass name and I feel embarrassed on his behalf when he introduces himself. I only read upto chapter 47 because I thought Jean Grey would be the love interest. I liked how she was portrayed in this fic but the moment I found out she wasn't the love interest is when I leave because there isn't much to look forward to in this fic.
I really like the concept and as a black guy myself I love having more Black MC. And as for the harem thing I say let you pick but if a choice has to be made i say the Harem route. Also if possible can you add the tags for when you do make a choice?
Not worth reading
Its... Yikes. I like superman stuff a lot so I was hyped for a 200+ chapter superman story but... its just not enjoyable. I don't really have any specific issues with the plot... its fine. really mediocre but good enough for a first or second book. My complaint with the story is solely with the MC and the relationships with those around him. The Mc is a very passive person, and a very, VERY, perverted person. He barely does anything through the 90 chapters I read other than follow around other people and being disgusting levels of perverted towards any woman he has met. His parents are stereotypes, literally, Strict Asian Mom and Teddy Bear Redneck, two extremely common tropes. That and the fact that there is repeated mentions of pedophiles, some incest and CONSTANT other pervert shit, his teacher at school, his GF being 18 when he is 14, its just kinda gross in general, The Maximoff Twins being the ONE SPECIFIC version that is incestual despite it being MCU, where they aren't, the Author chose to make that change. This is just a uncomfortable read as it feels like a peek into the mind of a genuine Degenerate half the time.
Listen bruv, you better not drop this Fic. Cuz let me tell you, there are countless Marvel/DC Fics that start great and then Boom! No updates for months. Hopefully this ain't one of them. Great Fic.
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