Authors Preamble:
This is my first novel so if you see anything wrong leave a comment so I can try to improve and/or fix it.
My plans for updating this novel is hopefully everyday but I cannot guarantee that as I have a job and a life outside of this. I will try to have at least 1500-2000 words per chapter but I will focus on ending points so I don't just go on with a chapter for no reason.
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This is a story about a Rio who dies when he wasn't supposed to. The gods decide to give him 2 choices, Rio chooses the second which come with 5 wishes. This sends him outside his home Omniverse into somewhere. First stop will be a sort of tutorial world and then main world which is the MCU with some differences.
Rio will have the force, a modified gamer system, a riolu egg and DNA lock.
I will not be writing any explicit scenes but they will be implied by fade to black when the time comes for such a situation. I have not decided on if it will be harem or not, most likely not unless readers really want it. Though there will likely be 2 females in the relationship at least but I don't really see that as a harem. If you have any suggestions leave a comment.
mid work, bro turned himself into an alicorn, which is a pony, I think. Also, bro can't google the definition of harem, blud can fight a dictionary if he disagrees
I have seen Authors do a 5 star review. This is my first novel so I am not sure how good it is so I will give it 4 stars. I am just writing for fun and I hope readers like my novel as well.
i love the story it reads nice and a nice way to pass the time
Good story, some funny moments, world background is expanding with other franchises mixed in the world, a fairly good wish fulfilling Mc, characters/companions are not just women like those op mc/harem fics, no romance yet, and enjoyable and makes you hunger for another Chp especially if your bored as hell.
Holy sh#! Bro does not know how to use paragraphs. two chapters in and theres wordwalls every time a character speaks. the author puts a dot to indicate finished sentence but doesn't bother to make them paragraphs
a qui voy acer muy sincero me encanta las historias que tengan esas situaciones de comedia y serio es muy buena para mí y ablano de la historia está bien para leer y los personajes es tan bien es echos para mí y se agrácese de sobre la música para desarrollar el texto y la historia es buena y la pregunta del millón te debería recomendar esta historia si tienes gustos en historias sobre la comedia, serio y la ira creo posdata: es lo que en tendí yo oki y es solo una opinión