Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon
Author: Metarln
4.22
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This is a story about fighting monsters and upgrading.
Aston, who traveled the world to solved the mystery of his birth, plunged into the dungeon without any hesitation and began the road of defeating monsters and upgrading.
However, it seems that, unconsciously, there are more and more beauties around me.
How is this going?
I'm here to fight monsters and upgrade, not to meet beautiful women like the red-eyed rabbit!!!
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t/n: I am not the author of this ff, I am just translating the raw chapters.
original: https://b.faloo . com/1337512.html
Patreon.com/METARLN
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Despite the spelling and grammar probprms, my main ossue comes feom just how rush, unorganised and just overall messy the story and writing. I can see a good story but man, sometimes things aren't explained, everything is just rushed and overall it feels like completely random at times. Thsir is no clear direction to the story and it feels like sometimes moat of what i am reading is a summary.
i liked it, simple as that, keep the good work bro. is it a translation ? if it is can you tell me the name ? .........................................
I've just realized after reading 118 chapters that I freaking hate this fanfic. why you gotta make so much of a beta 😕
i like the story how is, ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Writing quality one star it's really bad not unreadable but really bad. update stability five stars I think we get a chapter every day. story development I think its a really good idea five star. character design he's okay he's not a b**** so five stars. World background five stars
I expected more from this fanfic. The story is just sooo booring. My brain shut down multiple times while reading this ff. I read about 10 chapters and time is precious. The system is meh and rewards are too powerful. Overall its an average fic. (3/5)
It's a very good story, it has the potential to be the best danmachi story the writer always keeps it up and if you write good stories like this and other fanfics it would be great
Continue, e se possível aumente rapidamente a quantidade de capítulos!!! muito muito muito muito muito muito muito hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Well the story is well written but The main chapter is too much PUSHOVER and bit stupid it quite annoying...
Nice and different from others i have read. Thanks for the enjoyable world you have entered and brought me along for the ride
quality of the writing is bad, and word choice and skill descriptions are terrible.
Made it to chapter 10 and gave up cause this is MTL and the novel is kind of edited and badly at that
What is this thing ? Just one question, why give so many abilities to a character when all the fights are: "A monster appears, Ding +100 xp" End of the fight...