MHA:-Glitch In Reality
What would happen if Izuku tried to commit suicide after being bullied and neglected by the people he loved.
But he didn't die, he awakened a quirk, a quirk so powerful that it wouldn't be wrong to say it is the strongest quirk ever.
Now with a Cynical and Psychopathic personality, he is out for blood, and shake the very foundation of hero society.
Stick around to find out what he does and how he does.
This is my first time writing a fic, so I am open to constrictive criticism, and would love to know the areas where I can improve myself, while also would love to know what you like about my fic, so that i can work to improve it so that it becomes identity of my fics through which people can find out that these are my fics
NOTE:- THIS IS AU... DON'T TRY TO COMPARE IT TO THE CANON...ANY CHARACTERS DIFFERENT FROM CANON ARE DONE BASED ON CREATIVE LIBERTY...AND I HAVE NO INTEREST IN TOLERATING ANYONE WHO WISHES TO COMPARE THEM TO CANON
WARNING:- IT CONTAINS LOTS OF GORE, VIOLENCE, RAPE, AND ALL OTHER SORTS OF EXTREME DARK SHIT, SO READ IT AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION, AND THIS FIC IS A REALISTIC FIC AND WILL ALSO HIGHTLIGHT THE REALITY OF THE SOCIETY SO THIS FIC IS NOT FOR FAINT OF HEARTS.
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this is somehow worse than the story about the masochist fish. How do you make a story this boring? No seriously, teach me your wise ways on how to give myself a brain aneurysm. I had to skip through half of the dialogue cause of the cringe. truly someone needs to give you an award
Im glad thare are still people who just like me see this fact of how much of the great threat Izuku as a Vilian is to everyone in they world.
only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario
I gotta say I’m very impressed by this storyline and how you managed to implement a good amount of the characters and their personalities in each chapter. I’m looking forward to future chapters and hope you don’t drop this.👍
great concept, we're still really early on but it has lots of potential.the grammar could be improved, but it's not necessarily bad and you could do with better exposition and find a better way to get point across.
the execution is just poor & everything feels flat. worst is probably the beginning being a near carbon copy of MHA: Undying but 1000x times worse
Ahhh, it's frustrating that the hype that the author gives off falls flat when reading the FF. The grammar is decent but the sentence structure feels childish. Plus as others say, the MCs bad treatment seems fake. Its like your average FF with bland writing, although the idea is good. It's not a dumpster fire but the hole revenge feels like deku is whining about life.
Very interesting story, i like your writing and how plot is done, And i hope Yoyorozu Momowill join to his side. Momo in bikini pic for you as my thanks for the story.
Yeah… I’m gonna ask that you edit the early chapters so they aren’t blatantly copied. Especially in the parts where they don’t really fit. If you need more inspiration, twin Izuku fics are pretty common over on Wattpad. That said, I do like the direction you branched it off into. Less psycho more analyst. The romance options so far are also interesting.
Numix Great fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Mha fanfic idea immediately after MHA:-Glitch In Reality Mha : Oozaru A 19 year old boy dies in our world and is reborn into Mha as Izuku Midoriya with the blood of a Saiyan King in his veins. Harem Mitsuki Bakugo Inko Midoriya Yu Takeyama Nemuri Kayama Rei Todoroki Bulma Briefs Tights Briefs Panchy Chi-Chi Momo Yaoyorozu Videl Erasa Mina Ashido Fuyumi Todoroki Himiko Toga Shino Sōsaki Ryūko Tsuchikawa Caulifa Kale Vados Android 21 Supreme Kai of Time/Chronoa Towa Zangya Android 18
Great writing, both dark yet not too edgy, with a hint of some big events as well. Can't wait for this to peak.
A shameless 5 star review for myself, because why not, the reason I gave myself 5 star review is because I believe even if my story isn't 5 star right now, but by the end of this fic, I am sure, I will be worthy of not just mine but all of your's 5 star reviews. There are bound to be many mistakes, and plotholes, but lets be realistic, even the original story has many mistakes that's why we are hear reading fanfics, so I'll just strive to be better by ever chapter
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постоянное повторение предыдущих строк, откровенно говоря, раздражает. в главах они затягивают разговор и постоянно повторяют его, как будто для умственно отсталых. Иногда темы перескакивают друг в друга. The plot seems to be there, the idea is not bad, but why the hell did he want to go to UA school as a spy. Frankly, he seems like a loser, clinging to the chance to come back or be noticed and recognized.