DARK ASCENSION

Okay, so I just finished reading chaoter 10 and time for a review. Pros: The novel has an interesting development. It's one of the few that has a coherent story development. There's the occasional moments where it feels like the author is lost in building their world but even those moments are interesting. The main character is interesting and fun to follow. It's still early days but he honestly feels like a well-made character. Most of his skills or attributes have well-established links to the already provided back ground information. The world building so far may seem a bit cliche but the author is putting little hints of uniqueness. I'm honestly excited to see more of the world. Cons: The only cons so far are the occasional grammar errors and a few scenes that will benefit from descriptions on the surroundings. Where exactly he is and things like that . Overall, the novel has been interesting so far and is one that honestly makes me want to follow it. The only thing it needs, is more chapters.