This is another person’s book. You just changed the names. Basically everything else is copy pasted. Not cool bro.
9 months ago
2
nevershe
Good story without system (for me a positive point) good protagonist, my only criticism would be the excessive provocation by the opponent, I know it happens in real life, but it seems like there isn't a game where this doesn't happen and it seems somewhat unrealistic .
10 months ago
2
Devilived
I have to say I love the novel, the thing that stood out for me is the absence of a system that makes it much more realistic and engaging. the MC is very relatable, and the pacing of the story i quite good now. the one that I want is the frequency of the update[img=coins]
This is another person’s book. You just changed the names. Basically everything else is copy pasted. Not cool bro.
Good story without system (for me a positive point) good protagonist, my only criticism would be the excessive provocation by the opponent, I know it happens in real life, but it seems like there isn't a game where this doesn't happen and it seems somewhat unrealistic .
I have to say I love the novel, the thing that stood out for me is the absence of a system that makes it much more realistic and engaging. the MC is very relatable, and the pacing of the story i quite good now. the one that I want is the frequency of the update[img=coins]