Omniscient Reader (Alternate Story)

Perfect Novel for a what if🔥🔥 Also the writing is better than most people tbh and the relationship of Kdj and Yjh is so cute🥺

I loved this, sent me in an emotional rollercoaster. KDJ and YJH’s relationship was almost too good…and cut off.. Overall, the shortness made me a little too depressed.. If I’m not being too greedy..could I ask for more? …Please

I really enjoyed this story. I felt it stayed fairly loyal to the original characters while portaying different sides of their character not present in ORV. I especially liked the references to the original, which were cleverly executed. I liked this story somewhat more than the original because of how it explored Kim Dokja’s insecurities. Would recommend.

I am a fan of Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, so I was a bit hesitant to read this story at first. From the first few chapters, I would guess that the author believes the relationship between Kim Dokja and Yoo Joonghyuk in the original novel hasn't been completely explored, thus their relationship became the core of this novel. The exchanges between the two characters create a dynamic that naturally evolves. It is a blend of tension, humor, and even support, which shows the complexities and difficulties of building relationships online. The author uses a minimalist and direct style of narration, where the dialogue and short comments help advance the plot. The pacing is steady, maintaining engagement without overwhelming readers with technical details. However, for those who haven't read the original story, you may feel lost since there's not enough description of the characters' backgrounds. Because it is centered on dialogue and comments, you won't get a complete feel for their surroundings. Sometimes, it feels like two heads having a conversation. Nonetheless, the author's writing style is accessible, which will make this story appeal to most online readers. Great job!

Nice, this is fire 🔥. The book may be misleading at first, but when you dive deeper it's actually good. I need more of this👍.

Honestly, one of the best ORV fanfics. However, the author gave up on his story. Ps: Sorry for my grammar, I wrote with a translation. Word count: ushdidjhromehsisjdbdikdbdodndhfjendndif

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